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for Shadows Of The Past

by soldiersgirl0709

person Robs
schedule June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, that was a great chapter! I loved the way you did their first time. Kinda drawn out but not. Look forward to the next chapter!
schedule June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love Elias he is so him... like a child should be they just talk not think.. Love the lemon was incredible... Keep them coming!
person smmz79
schedule June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YEAAAAHHHH what an awesome chap... i love that it was not smooth like lucius planned, i loved that he kind of lost control it shows his desire for her.... wow what fab lemon!!!!!! ok so i love draco i just love him he is soooo funny!!!!!! a drawer of condoms.... ha ha lmao!!!!! ok so i love this i can NOT wait for the next chap totally excited!!!!! love ya SG you really are wonderful and i feel so lucky that i am able to read your writing you have an amazing gift!!!!!
schedule June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I enjoyed! Not just the smut, either, but the beauty of their relaxed, loving, open and honest desire for one another. I look forward to the "joy" of breakfast with Draco and Elias after Hermione gets acquainted with the morning hard-on I am sure Lucius will have to have assuaged. ;-) I am glad your friend was there to laugh out loud for me. Thank you, hon! Enjoy your busy day. HG4eva
schedule June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH MY!! How I LOVE LEMONADE!! Absolutely loved this chapter. I think is was perfect because they weren't perfect. Each of them not sure of themselves or what the other wanted. So I am thinking about setting up a lemonade stand for all of the readers of this story, but I will require LOTS AND LOTS OF LEMONS FROM YOU, PLEASE!!!!
schedule June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful update as usual, I am totally in love with this story, it is just brilliant and it is your Elias who makes it shine so much:-))I think Draco is absolutely rigth; Elias will rule Slytherin House one day:-))
person Gertie
schedule June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Finally! Love it! Love Elias and Draco's pranks. Thanks so much for such great smut and a very real moment between them.
schedule June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Now that was sex..Great chappy can't wait for more.
schedule June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
a very realistic first time and for that I applaud you...lovely
schedule June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lemons finally and OMG hot, even if it was quick it's still hot, the condoms in the draw had me laughing reminded me that a friend of mine found her mums and put them on the ceiling fan so when her mum turned it on, condoms went everywhere lol... Cant wait to see what trouble Draco and his new sidekick get into lol...