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for Shadows Of The Past

by soldiersgirl0709

person alecto
schedule June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YES YES YES YES YES YES yes yes yes
i feel like i need a post coital smoke after that one.
good grief, i'm turned on after.
person Jullsy
schedule June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like your story more and more with each update. Elias and Darco are so funny.
I have 2 theories avout Jessa: she will be Dragc's girlfriend or she can be Lucius daughter. I am afraid that she is going to become crazy and try to harm Hermione and Elias as you talked about a big smut...
person MegNutz
schedule June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg wrestling really lol very good chapter and can't wait for the next one more lemons please :D oh and I have a question are you going to continue the story Girl Talk at all? because I really like that one too! let me know please :D
schedule June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Looks like Draco is now going to get that childhood he missed out on, finaly. I hope he didn't hurt himslef trying not to laugh t the 'wrestling match'? LMAO! this just gets better and better.
schedule June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love lemons but honestly Elias is a riot.. the inocence in him is beautifly done.. Keep them coming so we can keep reading and enjoying it..
person catstaff
schedule June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* Oh, the memories!

My sister and I used to do something similar on the stairs when we were little, only without the pillow-pile at the bottom, lol! Elias and Draco are way too cute together. Can't wait for more!

~Catstaff
person MegNutz
schedule June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOVED IT!!!! lol oh and there son is sooo cute I love the way that u have written him! can't wait for the next chapter and hope its soon. !!! keep up the good work!
schedule June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
thank you, thank you, THANK YOU!
schedule June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay in all honesty I had a hard time making it through the bit with Draco and Elias. I seriously could not stop laughing. I almost peed myself, my sides are sore, and I snorted just a little bit of diet Coke up my nose....but I loved it. I can't even begin to tell you just how badly I needed to laugh like that. So thank you! I can't wait for more....oh, and I'm still a bit puckered up....those were some truly fantastic lemons! lol
person VoraciousReader
schedule June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, I loved Draco filling hid nightstand with condoms!LOL. Is this going to be a running gag? Condoms in his desk, in his pockets, under his chairs, etc? And the lemons were great.