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Just wanted to say loved this story and I think Elias might just be the funniest little man in any story I have read. 5 o'clock in the morning sitting reading this trying to laugh quietly so I didn't wake my whole house hold up.
Brilliant

Adorable story. Thank you for sharing it. I really enjoyed Elias' character throughout.

I do not care how many times I reread this story, whether it be here or at Granger Enchanted, I will ALWAYS laugh so hard at Ch. 7. six, parades, buried, lobsters! ROFLMAO! And the bathroom scene ... oh my gosh. I die laughing every single time. I can't help it. It is written to perfection, and I can picture it all.

I am positively in love with how Lucius reacts to Elias. Their back and forth is hilarious! It was a nice contrast to how your first chapter made me a bit teary eyed.

This story is just as entertaining to read a seccond time around as it was the first. Brilliant work, your Elias were priceless.

I think this is beyond a doubt my favorite story you have written so far. I read this in one day and could not stop. You are incredibly gifted. I appreciated the time you took to develop each of the characters and weave in their stories. I know you put a disclaimer at the beginning mentioning the characters would not be cannon, but I think you did a miraculous job keeping them in cannon with the situations. I truly believe that if they had each been through what you put them through, they could feasibly have reacted exactly as you made them. That's not true with mot Hermione/Lucius fanfiction. Keeping Lucius powerful and allowing his personality quirks to shine through despite his reformed views of morality made him sooo much sexier and fun to read! I truly hope to read more work like this from you in the future - I am very impressed. I know you mention on your blog that you have or had a story you were trying to publish and I can only wish you luck in publishing it. I'm sure you don't need luck though, your skill speaks for itself. Oh and I don't tend to like stories where Lucius and Hermione have a son, but it worked so well here and how could anyone possibly not love Elias?

Thank you for a wonderful story!

Best,
PhoenixCG

I love this story, i keep coming back to read it again and again. It would be great to see an epilogue...is she pregnant already at the end of the last chapter??

Josie xx

Lovely so far

Loved it! And I think it is the first story I have read that casts Lucius in a solely positive light once he is with Hermione (even before that, he was reacting to grief, not being a creep). Your Draco was great and it seemed as though LM's humanity spread to his son as he was able to allow himself to feel deeper also. I was kind of expecting to see Jessa spending Christmas with them, "as part of the family". Thank you for the hours of enjoyable reading and sharing your talents with us. p

I hate when Snape dies in a story, even avoiding some that say he is going to in the summary. I am really glad that I did not know it was going to be a part of this story as I would have missed out on a very enjoyable read (like all of yours have been so far). Does Jessa know that Draco is Snape's Godson? That is kind of weird, huh? Reading on... p