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for Shadows Of The Past

by soldiersgirl0709

person kittycat30
schedule June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Was Jessa w/ Snape? Well, that's my guess for now (but I'm usually wrong). Draco was so naughty! I guess that is probably in the back of every man's mind when two women hug, huh? Draco and Jessa could be interesting together... Naughty workplace sex w/ a hot naughty wizard - I love it! Great chapter!
schedule June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lovely!
person kittycat30
schedule June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
She does deserve to be seduced and romanced & I love reading about it!!! Lucky girl... she heard what we all want to hear at the end of the day - you're beautiful!!! Your writing is beautiful & I look forward to the next update! (some Jessa info maybe?)
person smmz79
schedule June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lemons leomons lemons.... LOVED this chap i especially love that draco has bonded so deeply with elias..... you are awesome sg i was looking forward to this chap all had a very long and very HOT garage sale and this is just what i needed at the end of my day... i love that lucius and hermione are becoming so close.... and lucius is so tender and caring i just love him.... great great job
schedule June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That the most delicious lemonade, thank you. I look forward to more of them and to finding out more about Jessa and her family and history. Hugs to you! HG4eva
person magical
schedule June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. It's so sweet and sexy. I never read much Lucius/Hermione before, but you have definitely turned me into a fan. And Elias makes me laugh so hard. He's so cute. Can't wait until you update again!
person MegNutz
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well that was hot lol thanks for the smut :D can't wait for the next chapters and thank u for the next intallment of Girl Talk if u choose to do it (*which I hope u do :)*) keep up the good work!
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"Not if I eat you first" LMAO I literally laughed out loud at that comment. Great progress on the story. I love it so far and I always await your updates. I can't wait to see where you're gonna take their relationship.
person smmz79
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh yaaahhh what a great chap... i love the way you write lucius and his personality.. he is so damn sexy in your stories even when he is not hermiones love interest.... ok so we got a little more on jessa's background hmm i have a feeling she is talking about severus being her love it sounds an awful lot like him but what did he help her with and i want to say she is lucius' sis but her reaction to draco makes me think that she is not hmmm i am very interested in her past very good oc i love her and the personality you have given her... loved the afternoon quickie how hot is that up against a door wow.... i loved that jessa and draco were applauding them that was funny... i would like to thank you for this fic it has helped me get my mind off of things my fiance and i are moving it has been sooo stressful and he is going to take care of a sick family member that lives quite a distance away and while he is gone i am staying with some friends and after he gets settled there i will move down there but this process will take about 6ish monthes so i am really going to miss him and i just wanted to tell you how much i appreciate your stories bc they have been really helping me take my mind off of some things thank you
person Snakekat
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another fantastic chapter,you have a real talent for writting hot sex scene.