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by soldiersgirl0709

person smmz79
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yeah what a great chap i am sooo glad that jessa got some closure now maybe she could move onto draco.... what a passionate love scene between hermione and lcius and i am so glad that they finally admitted their feelings.... this was the perfect end to my day... we moved all day and cleaned and it is sooo freaking hot that this was really nice to unwind too.....
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
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“I can’t wait. In the first half hour he called me a dildo, outed you and dad, said he wanted to eat a whore and asked a house elf to play trains. The kid is a riot!” Draco laughed as they turned into the small dining room.

He wished with all his heart that he had been a child like Elias. The boy said and did whatever popped into his head.

“You should keep your penis to yourself. It’s private and Mum will get really mad if you don’t.” Elias said seriously.
“Keep my penis to myself….okay….I’ll try really hard.” Draco was trying to keep his laughter at bay but it was impossible. The child was just too precious and Draco was already taken with him. He understood now why his father hadn’t been able to walk away, he wouldn’t have either and suddenly wished that when he saw her years before in Diagon Alley that he had known the baby in the carriage was his little brother

“The kid would make a brilliant spy.” Draco said, in awe of the things Elias observed with no one the wiser.

“Yes! We buzzed the owlery and made all the owls shriek and scatter! There were feathers and poop everywhere!” Elias said excitedly. “And Draco let me pee in the bushes!”
“What charming habits you teach your younger brother already.” Lucius said through clenched teeth. Draco, however, did not look in the slightest bit repentant

“And he taught me a new song! There once was a witch from Paris, and I wasn’t quite certain what color her hair is! I’d almost given up hope when the wind caught her robes….”

“He could be a Gryffindor.” Hermione interjected. Both Lucius and Draco gave her an incredulous look. “Okay, probably not.” She admitted.

“A nanny-elf?” She looked over at Lucius with a frown on her face. “Lucius…”
“I know you disapprove, but Nonie is paid a wage. She isn’t a free elf and she doesn’t wish to be but she begrudgingly accepts a wage because she really wants to be Elias’s nanny.” Lucius hoped that would be enough to ease her mind on the subject.

Being a Malfoy servant after the war was a world different from being one prior, she was now very proud to serve the house of Malfoy and its softer, gentler masters.

“Knock…I can knock!” He said.
“Knock and wait for permission before you enter. Understand?”
“So I don’t catch you naked?” Elias quipped.
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you I need this light chapter after a box of tissues from the other..LOL
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww, shoot. I guess this means Severus really is dead. I'm so upset about that! But, at least the statue's robes billowed. Lol, that made me smile.
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wild, loud clapping going on over here. :-) You know I love my happy endings, so I am waiting to see what you do. Their declarations were utterly and completely perfect. Thank you! Hg4eva
schedule June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful chapter, so much emotions. So Jessie is a Gaunt, how interesting, my compliments for finding a really interesting background for her, not just any Death Eater. But, how old is Jessie? Voldemort, if my memory serves me rigth were around 50-60 years old. And, is Severus alive?
schedule June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness! For a moment I feared you might let him die... For the sake of the plot or whatever. Phew, so glad I was wrong! You'd have had me in desperate tears if that were the case!

Lovely chapter!
schedule June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm so confused! I like Draco and Jessa, but what I REALLY want is Severus back for Jessa. I like her so much!
schedule June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 1-2: Ah, Ron
person MegNutz
schedule June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
holy cow, when I thought he was going to die I started to tear up!!! another great chapter! keep up the good work and can't wait for the next one!!!