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September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just found and read up to this point today, love it so far, and will be watching for your next chapter!! Good character development, your Harry is really convincing because he is very true to all our "expectations" of him. Draco is much more AU which is so much harder to write because of preconceived "Draco-ness" your development has been slow and steady which is making him very believable. It is a fine line to walk - to not overdo the "lovey-dovey" and I think you are doing a great job of showing Draco's gradual recovery.
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September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter. There was one little problem: The golden egg concerned the second task (freeing the captives from the merfolk of the dark lake), not the third (the maze).
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September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
d'aaaaaaawwwwwwwwww. that was adorable! I love this story *huggles*
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September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwwwwwww! <3
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September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
im really loving this story and this was such a cute fluffy chapter and i do agree with you i think no matter how understanding if a 16 yearold guy came out/got caught out by his friend the friend would be a little tense and jelous about it and a little worried they were gunna be replaced as "best friend"
i think your getting the charectors very well and its awesome not having to wait long for an update too ^_^
xoxo
bekkah
i think your getting the charectors very well and its awesome not having to wait long for an update too ^_^
xoxo
bekkah
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September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOOO! Lovely fluff chapter. Can't wait for the next one, fluff or not! (If only others updated as quickly as you I wouldn't have to resort to only reading complete stories instead of WIPs!)
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September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for taking the time to update this fic once more.
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September 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ARG! I was reading your story quite happily until the last chapter ended with a rather gripping cliff hanger. HOW DARE YOU D: UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!! (Ironically, the captcha I have to submit in order to leave this review was 'depleted' which is exactly how I feel. BTW, Ron better not be a prat, as I'm rather fond of this fluffy angst story!)
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September 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love this story.
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September 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying the story and wish for you to continue. I find it interesting to see how Harry and Draco are getting along with each other. I do hope that Draco and Harry continue with their friendship and see where it goes. Im glad that they have each other but most of all I am proud of how they are handling things. I know its hard but they are good for each other. I do hope that Ron will understand why Harry is doing what he is doing. Please continue.