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February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy reading this shit! ;)
Well anyway, have you ever heard of air enemas?
If not, it's basically just filling your guts with air using some kind of pump.
I thought Harry might really enjoy this as you can let out some quite phenomenal farts.
Believe it or not, the first time I stumbled upon this fetish was on youtube.... *snort*
Keep up the good work! *salut*
Balingo
Well anyway, have you ever heard of air enemas?
If not, it's basically just filling your guts with air using some kind of pump.
I thought Harry might really enjoy this as you can let out some quite phenomenal farts.
Believe it or not, the first time I stumbled upon this fetish was on youtube.... *snort*
Keep up the good work! *salut*
Balingo
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February 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you get my reviews. I know personally I'm horrible about acknowledging when someone reviews consistantly.
I do love this story. I feel a really undignified amount of glee when I see an update. I really do. I get a little giddy...
So! I can't wait until I see more! I'm beyond excited just waiting for it.
I do love this story. I feel a really undignified amount of glee when I see an update. I really do. I get a little giddy...
So! I can't wait until I see more! I'm beyond excited just waiting for it.
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February 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow. This was a very nice chapter. I loved the bit with Harry using Draco's lotion in his play, and Draco watching without Harry realizing it. That was such a purely Slytherin move on Draco's part. And Harry calling out Draco's name during orgasm made it that much more brilliant. And that whole scene in Draco's office was very well done. I can't even imagine what Dean would say to the two of them as a couple. As usual, I laughed in some places here, cringed a little at others, and found it all completely fascinating. Your characters are just so real that it's hard not to get swept into their mindsets, including the little quirks and kinks they each have. I love your alliterations in this one, as well. Your writing is very engaging. Needless to say, I am looking forward to continued installments. Thank you so much for your kind words, and for writing a story that makes me want to leave in-depth reviews. For some reason, I believe reading about scat forces me to think in a way that other kinks don't. Maybe because most people would likely find it repugnant on the surface, but your story goes deeper than just displaying the kink. You go into the whys and hows of the situation, and I really like that. I'll stop fangirling over this now, before I end up writing you a novel, but you handle this kink really well. I generally avoid scat fics, but I'm drawn in by this one to the point that I can begin to understand why some people would have this particular kink. And I'm fairly certain I will end up reading this story multiple times. Great addition to a great story.
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January 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading this story over teh last few days as I read the original "crap" some time ago and was interested in how it would continue. Although this particular fetish is not really my cup of tea I remain true to the old adage of " try anything once" . I find your writing style excellent and particularly enjoy the fact that you have somehow managed to construct an actual story around the idea of " sex with poop". As a psychology major I particularly enjoy the mental processes that each character goes through to get to a certain frame of mind. The only thing I have to point out is that when you wrote the chapter with the champagne you used Fahrenheit body temperature( 98.6) instead of Celsius (37) which they would use in England. This did annoy me a bit because I am not American and one of my pet peeves is authors who use American measurements such as feet, pounds and Fahrenheit. I know it is easiest to think in the measurement that you are used to but plz remember that our boys are English!
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January 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was perfect! I loved it from beginning to end. I felt so bad for Harry though, what with his accident and them not letting Draco in his room. That would be really humiliating, especially for Harry. Poor man. Boo on those stupid rules. You made me laugh out loud in places with this one, as well as nearly cry. I was so worried for Harry when he was hurt, but I couldn't help but laugh at Draco polyjuicing into Hermione. So sweet, especially considering how vain Draco can be. I enjoyed getting the unguarded look at what Draco does when he's on his own, almost as much as Harry did. I laugh-grimaced at the image of him using a banana as a dildo. That would take a lot of stretching. I love the inventiveness of that, though. Yet another chapter that made me feel a mix of emotions. Great work!
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January 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really shouldn't love this story as much as I do. But, I can't help it. I just keep coming back for more... And more... And more.... And more... So I demand more. And soon. Just saying.
Much love, and until then,
Alena
Much love, and until then,
Alena
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January 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Alcoholic's have been known to do wine emina(sp) and get drunk off of it so I would guess that Draco would be rather tipsy after this little episoide. Intresting fic don't usually like this kind of thing, but my curiousity has gotten the better of me and I can't seem to stop reading.
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January 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was an eye opening chapter. It made me feel like I really understood Draco and his and Harry's dinamic.
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January 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I laughed so much at this one. I was right there with Harry about the Come and Go Room. Ha! And I could definitely see him being attracted to the twins, especially in that situation. I do have to say this, though. I really couldn't help but feel sorry for the fact that Harry was that uncomfortable defecating in the vicinity of others, though given his background, it is quite easy to understand. I also felt sorry for him being constipated for so long. One word: ouch. It's easier to see now why he finds the act of defecation arousing, even if he is ashamed of his bodily functions. Holding something in for so long, it would probably feel like bliss to release. And I'm slightly disturbed with myself for having said that now. lol. Thank you for once again pushing my limits.
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December 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was interesting. I 'm continuing to love this story. I love the way you seem to always put the right words together to describe things. Things that should be disgusting somehow become appealing when looked at from the characters' perspectives. The shift backward was nice. It fills in some of the gaps as to why and how the boys developed this particular kink. After reading this, it's easier to see the appeal of it. Thank you for writing this, and for your kind Author's Note. It's nice to know that my thoughts are appreciated so much. I always feel a bit silly leaving long reviews for things like this, but it's hard not to get drawn into character motivations, especially since you are so good at making them well-rounded. The kink itself is intriguing for me, and the fact that you weave it into the story so well just makes it that much more fascinating. Please excuse my continued gushing. I'm very much looking forward to the next installment.