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by margaritama

person mlui
schedule May 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is very nice and sweet!
person smmz79
schedule May 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh wow that was a great one shot..... i loved the thought that you placed in both hermione and draco... i could feel his anguish and her hope.... loved it
person kittycat30
schedule May 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lovely... just, ... wonderful & lovely!
person Anon
schedule May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooooooooo! It can't be just a one shot. I want to walk out there with them and find out what happens next!!!!! Stalk them if I have to. LOL That was so touching and beautiful. You sure know how to tug at the heartstrings. I love that he was so sure he was beyond redemption and yet she saw right through him, probably always did. Loved it! :)
schedule May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WHY IS THAT COMPLETE SIGN UP? You're not done! More! Please? Don't end it here! Evil....
schedule May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story, hon. It was great! New side of Draco. :) Finish Her Shoes or I will hurt you. *sighs*
schedule May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awe, beaaauuuuuuuutifull. I love beyonce's new song, it's gorgeous. So is your writting!!! I love present tense, (if you havn't noticed my fic lol *cough cough*) it's so emotional and raw. I love a tortured Draco :) my fav. This was very heart warming. It made my sinus' tingle and my eyes water lol
person Robs
schedule May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was utterly brilliant! It's refreshing to see a oneshot that isn't PWP. I have to admit, reading the summary I almost turned away. I don't really go for angst and melancholy. Then I thought, no, it's margaritama, it'll be good anyway. I was right! Excellent. And I patiently await the next chapter of Her Shoes...

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