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Good so far, but you may want to avoid swearing, it is a Harry Potter fic after all.
Hogwarts probably doesn't have a drive, and Snape probably wouldn't call muggles mudbloods, if only because they wouldn't understand it.
Apart from a couple of tiny issues, it's a good start.

Love it! Update soon!

Update soon!

okay, this has really grabbed my interest! i hope you get the motivation to work on this some more, it sounds like it could get really twisty and stuff lol. keep up the good work :)

more please!!!

i really like this story, however i do have to say this......find a better way to switch to the other characters, even if you have to put a line through the page and label it Harry POV! in the first chapter you went from the first paragraph-Harry, second-Harry, third-Severus, eight-poppy........you get the idea! but the way you jump from paragraph makes me think that I'm still reading a harry paragraph but I'm actually reading a draco paragraph! now keep in mind I LIKE THIS STORY, it's interesting and i'd like to see more of it. BTW who is Severus' lover? update soon *kisses*

Wow i didn't realize exactly how anal retentive my review sounded! i honestly cannot wait to read more of this story. so here's me apologizing for pretending to be Simon Cowell! update soon *kisses*

Enjoyed :D

I love this story. The plot is really well written and enjoyable. Please update soon :)

This story is one of my favorites! I'm going into withdraw!! LOL I check for updates everyday :) Thank you for writing it.