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by RynStar15

schedule June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AHHH
I loved it
That was fucking amazing.

They're completely adorable together, and I CAN'T WAIT for more!

I'm also very glad Ginny and Hermione made up, even though there wasn't much focus on them the point was still made.

I can't wait until the next update!
person Robs
schedule June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
loved that chapter! Maybe it was a bit of a cheese-fest, but it fit in well with the rest of the story. Look forward to the next chapter!
schedule June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I'm not sure if I'll ever be able to give you a good enough review. Between 'Breaking the Chain' and 'Penance' I am speechless. I absolutely adored 'B the C' just the concept that they traveled back in time and all of the hardships Hermione and Draco encountered, oh my. I was saddened when it ended, but I truly enjoyed your portrayal of how everything had to tie together. And now, Penance is bloody magnificent! I enjoy how she alienated herself from the wizarding world, but at the same time, something is nagging me, but I can't quite put my finger on it. I feel as though Hermione is getting off too easy or something. But then I'm conflicted because she had the choice to choose whether or not to leave in the first place. Hmm. And this whole rescue mission regarding Harry. It seems to me as though something is definitely not right there... And if Hermione did in fact either give birth to satanic spawn or else she rid herself of the evil, would it not have occurred to her to attempt to gain revenge on the person who forced her to endure the that hell in the first place?? Or did it warp her mind so much that she underwent a complete personality change and opted for that brave little gryffindor who had defeated so much vileness to just dissipate into nothingness?? Oh well. Regardless of my random ranting, thank you SOOO much for your stories!! And I look forward to the rest of Penance and many more Harry Potter fics in the future!!!!
~A devoted fan.
schedule June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like where this one is going!!!! I'm hoping the end of this one doesn't make me cry!!! Hope you update soon!!!! I'm just on love with story... I'm just wondering and thinking that Hermoine's child is the key to getting though the wards.... only what did she do with the child????? Gave it up maybe? If so then what will happen... Will she and Draco have to go back to the States to to get him or her and if so can you have Draco stop by Bryson City, North Carolina and see me for about a day I think that I can get out all of my needs in a day! Maybe... Update soon!!
schedule June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I no sooner review this story and head out to look for others and you had it updated man I could not ask for better timing!! I'm hoping whne this review is done that it will updated again... maybe not but a girl can hope!! Great chapter!!
schedule June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG - he LOVES her so much. I adore how you've really fought to keep him as canon as possible yet matured him and all the while completely and utterly in love with her. I'm bawling and will beat you (just kidding....well, maybe not...okay, no I'm kidding)...if they don't end up together....LOL..sniff sniff.
schedule June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Why I am suspecting that very soon you will give us a tissue alert!!! O my dear God!!! Please I beg you a happy ending for this two. Does he really know what happened to her? I meant Draco? Is there a baby anywhere or and abortion of some kind? You brought many questions, but that is good, that tells us that the plot is working and our imagination fly on different directiosn and you will be like a captain that put us back on track.
schedule June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love it! amazing chapter!! can't wait to see what happens next.
schedule June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay!! they are almost together!! *happy*
I was going to say this in an earlyier review but I forgot:
I am guessing that Hermione got an abortion when she realised she was pregnant?
and lucius didn't know, but he obviously knew she was pregnant, because he sent someone after her asking about the child.
why would lucius want to know where the child was??
update soon!!!
xxx
schedule June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Bring it on!!!!!!!! LOL!