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by RynStar15

person Robs
schedule June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG another cliffie? So she's almost out, but not quite. That girl has a major hero complex. Gutting that Draco can't help her. He must be beside himself to think that she is back in the clutches of his father. Look forward to the next chapter!
schedule June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG Please some wandless magic here,, Rescue mission on the way. My knight and shining armor.. YEEAPPY!!!!
schedule June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm sooo confused. I don't understand that last line.

Was it Harry who said it or someone else? If it was Harry well then...What in tarnation...?

Oh please update soon to satisfy my need to understand!!!!
schedule June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love this story! I'm absolutely hooked. Can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WHAT???? Cliffie is baaaad! Naughty, you are naughty. Her powers were jolted back by a combination of her fear for Draco and her love for him...at least that's my theory.
schedule June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am going to take one wild guess and say that Hermione has her magic back because of Draco. Because her emotion gave it back to her? She needed it to save him and so it was there for her.

Tricky tricky though. It could be anything.

I love this story fully. Every chapter has ben at the edge of my seat. Your style of writing is intoxicating.
Looking forward to the next update.

xo
dM
schedule June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YOu are simply evil evil evil!!!!!!!!!! I like your style!!! He he...
schedule June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I REALLY LOVE THIS STORY I JUST HOPE IT DONT END THE YOUR OTHER STORY BREAKING THE CHAIN. I ALSO LOVED THE STORY I JUST BROKE
MY HEART THE WAY IT ENDED. BUT VERY GOOD.
person Anon
schedule June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Ginny came around. I thought she would. Might be the only thing I've been right about so far. LOL How's she going to react when she finds out about Harry though and how will that affect her relationship with Luna????

Thank goodness she made Hermione go to Draco and well, talk didn't really happen now, did it? LOL And damn that coitus interuptus!!!! How rude! I wonder what raid they're planning. And finally they got to be together in the biblical sense - wonderful. And okay, to step back a bit. Was she pregnant to Lucius or not? I can't imagine he'd want a half blood bastard child so what happened to that baby if the pregnancy actually came to fruition???? That enough questions for you? LOL
schedule June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It was cheesy but in a good way:) I just can't wait to see how she gets her magic back. I have an idea but I will just see how it plays out. Update soon!