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by RynStar15

schedule July 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is really beautiful
please continue
and please don't let hermione die!
person Robs
schedule July 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous chapter! I really hope that Hermione manages to save Harry, and that Draco manages to save Hermione. Look forward to the next chapter!
schedule July 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You cannot let Hermione die!! I simply won't allow you!! There has to be a happy ending -- Hermione and Draco defeat Lucius and live happily ever after. Or maybe not... I trust you. You are brilliant therefore you probably know best.

By the bye, whatever happened to the baby that Lucius and Hermione made? The boy? Did he die? Did she murder him? Hmmm...

All the best!
schedule July 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you are making me cry dammit.
schedule July 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was pures steam!!! We need more and a cure for Hermione/Draco and I plea for a happy ending.
schedule July 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the new chapter.
Excellent.
I have a feeling she is going to get Voldy's soul to join her body since she is already dying and maybe that would take care of him..
Just a guess waiting and wanting more.

what's with some of these words they give you to post a review - this time it's vulgarly get
person kazfeist
schedule July 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very emotional 19th chapter. I can't wait to see how she's cured, and Voldie is removed from Harry. :D
person Anon
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
More twists and turns then a dying basalisk. I never know what's going to happen next which makes your stories all the more intriguing. Love the idea of Voldemort sharing Harry's body. Well done!!
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
First Draco now Harry what in the world are you thinking jk ;) Please keep going i love it.
person Robs
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Brilliant chapter! Sorry, haven't got time to leave a proper review...look forward to the next chapter!