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person kazfeist
schedule July 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I knew you wouldn't disappoint...though Hermione's actions, seemed a bit uncharacteristically harsh. :D
schedule July 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, this is the firts time I am really not satisfied! Hermione wouldn't kill her baby. I understand that it's a baby she didn't want-even worse it's a rape baby. Abortion, I could have understood. Giving it up for adoption, too. Both are understandable, human and sane solutions. But killing a child? I don't believe that she'd do that.

A child is never guilty, no matter how it was conceived or who the parents are. A baby cannot be bad. It's people who make us who we are. Genetics are such a minor part when it comes to our personality. If there isn't some serious twist or background information you haven't given us yet, then I am sorely disappointed...
person Robs
schedule July 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG, the suspense in this story is killing me! I really thought she was going to die then. I'm glad Draco managed to take Lucius out. I'm guessing that Hermione was saved in much the same way as Harry was in DH? I really hope Draco can find a way to keep her alive. Look forward to the next chapter!
person kazfeist
schedule July 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What a cliffie! :D
schedule July 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok seriously, i'm blinking back the tears right now. That last chapter was amazing even if the cliffie is just cruel lol. I can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule July 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that's not the last chapter is it??
there better be another one, and it will be like the last book, Voldemort inside Hermione will be killed, but she wont be!
and then they will find a way to fix the curse on her, and then they will live happily ever after?
please?? haha
xoxo
schedule July 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Uhmm... NO! You cannot be serious! I am sure there is a catch, right? She can't be dead and by the way I don't believe she'd give her son to Lucius knowing that she's going to die anyway. He's already dead, isn't he? She gave him the adress of a cemetary, didn't she? I am waiting for the next chapter to clear all of this up!
schedule July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh...Oh my...

I'm...I'm...I'm crying. I'm crying like a fool, but it was so sad and so beautiful...so very heartwrenchingly beautiful!!

It was tragic...just simply tragic. You should warn people before reading this story. It's a ride of emotions every other chapter. It's a bit overwhelming at times.
person retalia
schedule July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
what....WHAT!!!!
schedule July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A box of tissues is gone!!!!!!!!! OMG, Madre!! (Mother) This was, Iam lost for words!!!!!! Please Please I need some ass kicks next time and let's start with Lucius please, I know you have something under your sleeve a great twist that is coming I can smell it!!!!!!! Do not make us suffer with this cliffie to long. ( I am hoping for a miracle of some sort hear) LOL