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by RynStar15

schedule May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oooh cant wait for more!
update soon!
person Robs
schedule May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Draco has more than one agenda with finding her, doesn't he? I just haven't worked out what it is yet...

Look forward to the next chapter!
schedule May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I likes it so far! While I know it just started and all, I hope you give more explanation for why she left the magic world.

My fave little bit is that Hermione knows stuff about cars too.
schedule May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love the twist of this story. I can't wait to see what happens next! I am totally hooked.

P.S. Are you going to finish Breaking the Chain and when?
person Anon
schedule May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's all so intriguing. Who's carrying on with the battle? Who helped the death eaters escape and who really has Harry captive? I have so many questions. I love it. Bring on the next piece of the puzzle please. :)
person Robs
schedule May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think hate is a little strong...

Great chapter. Kind of explains a lot without giving too much away if that makes sense. I can see myself getting addicted to this story, very easily. An original plot, with characters that are actually in character as far as they can be. Hmm, definitely will be checking regularly for updates! Look forward to the next chapter!!
person kazfeist
schedule May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this one pretty well, so far. I would think that she'd use her wand to shrink down all her books and other necessities, too. That way, she'd be better prepared. Can't wait for the next chapter. :D
person Citten
schedule May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lovin' this story! i do hope that you will be posting the next chapter and soon! i really like what you have done with the plot. that they had their war and that they are in an even worse situation. but most of all that malfoy switched sides and he was the one that came to find her. :) i will be watching for the next chapter! cant wait to see where you go next in the story!
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I decided to check it out and boy this story looks good too.
I'll be keeping at eye on it =]
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope this one had enough tissue alerts on Harry's parts, because that will be very eimotional. On the other hand pls do not kill any of them this time ..... TY More More More