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by RynStar15

schedule June 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey this is getting intresting so keep them coming...
schedule June 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love dark, smexy, slightly-obsessed-with-Hermione Draco. He is RAWR!

He is just her dark knight in grimy armor isn't he? And she really is DENSE! WOW, open your eyes Hermione. I was actually happy he told her off about taking advantage of her. I thought that speech was wonderful.

Sigh, I'm really praying for a Draco/Hermione ending to this one and the UST is killing me by the way. It's killing me.

PS: love the idea of Crooks being an animagus...LOL
person Robs
schedule June 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I knew Hermione would try to blame Draco for last night, but he's right. She didn't have to do any of that stuff. I hope they manage to finish their journey without killing each other, LOL. Look forward to more!
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was HOT...phew...*fans self*. I love how unsure Draco is in the Muggle world and yet here is the sweet Hermione unveiling the simple magic of the Muggle way of life and people. Okay, so he doesn't see the magic but that scene in the lift was HILARIOUS. He desperately wants her and I want him to just lose control with her....she needs it.

I hope she doesn't wake up all harpish! LOL
person Germania
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like your story, but where is crookshanks now?
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was cool and unexpected... nice move..
person Robs
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I loved their little drunken escapade! LOL at her chucking up though. Does every bar check ID in the states then? It doesn't always get checked in the UK. How awkward will Hermione make things when she wakes up and remembers that? xD Look forward to the next chapter!
person kazfeist
schedule May 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Liked the third chapter, too! Trying to figure out what kind of stake bed truck the man was driving...and International, maybe? :D
person Anon
schedule May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"Don't touch a woman's stereo"! LMAO Ain't that the truth? Great to see Hermione still has her backbone and won't take any notice of Draco's tendecies to still belittle her. I bet it's driving him crazy to discover he's finding her more and more attractive too. Laughed at her thoughts of thinking he was good looking when he wasn't talking too. I'm really intrigued to discover exactly what Draco's been up to all this time and what his plan is for rescuing Harry. I want more (NOW) just so you know. LMAO Another awesome chapter. :)
schedule May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Draco likes Hermione...Draco likes Hermione...na na na na na!

LOL - love the MI-6 feel of this fic. Love Draco's loner attitude as well and how it contrasts with Hermione's ever present energy and smarts.