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June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
why wont she tell them about Lucius??
great chapter, keep it up!!
xxx
great chapter, keep it up!!
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June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is intense. Its an emotional roller coaster every chapter, one really needs to prepare oneself before delving into this story.
I like that even in hardest of chapters you always have a moment or two of comic relief. Its refreshing and I find in fanfic, not at all common.
This plot of the continuing war has been done before, but there's something so unique with your twist to it.
I'm sincerely enjoying the humor, violence, raw emotions, and budding romance that has been entwined so geniously together.
Always looking forward to your updates.
xo
dM
I like that even in hardest of chapters you always have a moment or two of comic relief. Its refreshing and I find in fanfic, not at all common.
This plot of the continuing war has been done before, but there's something so unique with your twist to it.
I'm sincerely enjoying the humor, violence, raw emotions, and budding romance that has been entwined so geniously together.
Always looking forward to your updates.
xo
dM
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June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi - sorry for not reviewing Explanations - I felt it was a transitional chappie and was waiting for the next...not cause I don't love the story still, certainly.
This one was a plot mover, huh? I don't know if Lucius is Lucius. The fact that he took Narcissa's life force by drinking her blood and then taking Bellatrix as his wife means Voldemort didn't leave, at least to me. But what's up with Hermione's child? And she needs to tell her friends what's going on.
This one was a plot mover, huh? I don't know if Lucius is Lucius. The fact that he took Narcissa's life force by drinking her blood and then taking Bellatrix as his wife means Voldemort didn't leave, at least to me. But what's up with Hermione's child? And she needs to tell her friends what's going on.
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June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OK One question BABY????????????????? The lines in between left us with that idea......... Crazy yeah Intresting Hell Yeah!!!!! A baby brother for Draco Outch!!!!! Or it was Draco who did it? Ah, so many questions.... Hermione cannot perform magic that is the biggest one of all..... Oh well I have to wait until you get us more... Keep them coming.
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June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, Ginny is a bit pissed off! So where are they now then? Headquarters? I hope Hermione does tell them what really happened, otherwise she is being a little bit hypocritical. I'm currently deliberating the ways in which this could possibly get more interesting...
Look forward to the next chapter!
Look forward to the next chapter!
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June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it so far I cannot wait to see what happens next!
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June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok I am intrigue and surprise.......... What kid? Abortion? Adoption or ??????????????? This is intresting but do not let the romance die.. He needs to fight for her and she needs to stand up!!!!!!!! The Hermione that we all love is the intelligent, independent and sassy girl. And our Draco is just simply adorable ....
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June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was just so traumatic and so scarily real (more real than I wanted it to be actually). Poor Hermione - to survive that - well I don't know how she went on from there or what she had to do to get to where she was even if it was just a hollowed out shell of her former self. As for your cliffy, not sure whether something actually happened then or she's gone back into her memories to think about what happened after Lucius left her alone. Hmmmmm.
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June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So she had a son? She's protecting a child? Hermione is completely dense and I barely recognize her -- that's a compliment -- when will she find herself? And she continues to hurt all those around her...enough! Find your inner Gryffindor.
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June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! What happens now?