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by RynStar15

person Robs
schedule June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So she's finally admitted to herself that she likes him! I hope he continues to be Draco now, not Malfoy. So he and Minerva are the only two that know of the reason she really left? Interesting...xD I hope she manages to get her magic back. It would be a bitch if she didn't. I'm intrigued as to how things are going to get yet more interesting....look forward to the next chapter!

p.s. This is the second review I have written for this chapter, but my internet went mental the first time and I lost it...it may or may not have posted it, so sorry if it did. Actually that's a lie. I'm not sorry, because your story deserves to have many reviews. But, yeah. I'll shut up now.
schedule June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I adore that man....he wears his heart on his sleeve. And Hermione just take the happiness. It's a beacon of light admist the darkness. He loves you - surely she can see it. Stop being afraid. The only way she'll conquer her past is stop being afraid. This step with Draco was huge. They both need each other so desperately.

Now, her pregnancy. I can't tell if she just aborted - which I can see her doing. I can't imagine she would have given a magical child up for adoption. More more more. *chomps on virtual cookie*
schedule June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ow Ow!!! *wolf whistles*

Obviously she had Lucius Malfoy's baby...but why won't she tell anyone?
I mean I can see her pride being damaged, but she did fight it sounds like. I don't understand why she won't tell everyone except Draco and McGonagall why she left. SO confuzzled with Hermione's mind frame. I loveee it!!!

Terribly excited for your next update.

*heart*
xo
dM
person Anon
schedule June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You did it to me again. LOL Once again I was wrong with my guessing. I was sure Hermione was back in the past but no, Mulciber was right there in the room with her. Thank goodness Draco clued in that something was wrong and sorted him out. But goodness, all that physical punishment - how does she keep going? I can understand Ginny's reaction at seeing Hermione again too - that must have been such a shock and Ginny grieved for her for so long - all the anger for what she perceived had happened to her. But she will forgive her, I'm sure she will. Going on my guesswork lately I could be wrong. ;)

Everyone else seemed to take it rather well, except for our fianter, I suppose but jeez, the last person they needed to see was Rita Skeeter. With any luck she'll turn back into a bug and we can squash her. And I can just imagine her reactions to finding out about Draco's parents and aunt, there's so much for her to catch up on. And second of all, I hope she gets her magic back - you know what I want first - more deliciousness with Draco. LOL
person Robs
schedule June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Damn Lucius to hell! He is such a bastard. I hope Hermione does get her magic back. Draco really is quite the benevolent soul, ain't he? He appears all rufty tufty, but underneath is vulnerable. That's how I perceive him anyway. I hope Lucius isn't wreaking too much havoc around in the next chapter...I look forward to it!
schedule June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I WANT COOKIES

But also to tell you how much I love it :D
I really think Hermione ought to tell Draco about "the boy" ;)
But I suppose that could wait, lols.

This is coming along very nicely, and even though I'm not normally one to review lots until the story is finished I think you might be getting more love from me later if you keep this updating speed up. :D
Basically I love the plot line and you're an amazing writer :)
person kazfeist
schedule June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So, where did she hide Lucius' son? :D
person Robs
schedule June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cool, cool. So is Ginny going to start talking to her again then? I hope so, she's going to need a friend. So what is actually happening with the war and stuff? I think what I have gathered is that the war is over, and Voldemort is dead, but there are still loads of death eaters around that want revenge? I really like your Draco. He's caring and nice, without being fluffy and poncy with it. Look forward to the next chapter!
schedule June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This still intriguing.. Hermione not able to use her magic? Wow that is something.. Well as I always say keep them coming and Let's the games begin.
schedule June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like how it is not progressing too fast but in the same thought I hate it. Can't wait to see what happens next!