Reviews for Penance - Harry Potter

person SheWolf4025

schedule July 17, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Ok....just got done. Amazing, per usual! I love your writer's voice and you deal well in suspense!

Cheers!

Carolyn

person SheWolf4025

schedule July 16, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I enjoy your stories immensely so please take the following for the loving manner in which it's intended. You really do need to work on diction. Some of it may be typos and I understand that, but sometimes you clearly just don't know what words mean and it's distracting for the reader. The phrase is to "wreak havoc", rather than to "wreck havoc".

http://blog.oxforddictionaries.com/2016/01/wreak-havoc-wreck-havoc/

Cheers!

Carolyn

person JadedFate

schedule March 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I only have 1 word for this story. Intense. What a roller coaster! I laughed. I cried. I bit my tongue reading the last few chapters without stopping. Think you could spare Draco for a few minutes so he can kiss it better? Haha. Love your stories! On to the next one!

person MzPearlz

schedule September 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM

Vest.Story.Angst. and all that shiz. EVER. you had me GOING. Oh my goodness if this would have been halfway finished when I started reading it I would be raging. Epic ending. I bet you could make an epic epilogue thougggghhh!!! :D :D thanks for writing!!

MzPearlz

person hhait

schedule August 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM

Good plot with enough smut to keep us all happy!

person sarahkay502

schedule May 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM

This was a really imaginative story. I enjoyed it alot!! I only have one question. How do you give birth to a baby and still have your hymen intact? I liked how you gave Hermione her innocence back...but the baby thing didn't make any sense. Anyway...GOOD STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

person Jordan

schedule April 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM

This was a very good story and plot. I found very very few typos and my only greivance is i was raped a little over 6months ago please put a warning in the summary, "WARNING:contains rape scenes"

person Ysi

schedule March 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM

That a very good story. You had me hooked from page one. Loved it and I trully thought the ending would have been bad. Well done!

person kazfeist

schedule July 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM

Very nicely done! I particularly liked your reasoning on why Hermione survived the killing curse. Vey inventive. :D

person blondpierogi

schedule July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM

ooh wow! this story rocks!!!! i just read it straight thru and i loved it! great job!!

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