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person Blood Lust 777
schedule June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Damn that Ron, he needs to do things for himself, I don't know why Harry even stays friends with him.
Can't wait for the next installment....
person polka dot
schedule June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry. I feel bad for Hermoine married to a jerk and having Malfoy pick on her after her miscarriage, but she's an adult and so is Ron. Harry isn't doing them any favors by sheltering them from reality. He should tell Malfoy to shove off and get himself and nice man.
person alexia
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love the last chapter, good twist! please update soon.
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
huh??? huh??? what happened??? it really sounds like draco is telling harry that he actually loves him and would take extra mile to get to have harry in his bed...but...what happened??? why or the sudden hush treatment and pure blood talking??? and...and...they story ended?? just what happened??? i want more....definitely want more....will there be more?? please??? please???
person BloodLust 777
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please, please,please,do an update.
schedule May 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh!!! Did Ron follow him? I soooo need chapter 3!!!
schedule May 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh yah...they finally clicked...but...what ron is doing there??? anyway, don't let ron ruining the fun....love it...please continue the story....please keep it up and hurry for the next charpter!!
schedule May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
so, I know draco cannot be that heartless and surely there must be something between him and harry.....have to admitted that I wasn't very fond on the storyline but have to say it is very well written, and actually becoming very interesting to read. well done!! please keep it up and looking forward to see the follow up.
person polka dot
schedule May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
gotta love the bad boys!
person missen1
schedule May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
brilliant! thanks