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May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hey really like the story but you might want to watch out by using lines like "By the name of Moon I will punish them" is to closly related to sailor moon. and they might just pull your story although i hope they don't just be careful. hope to be reading more from you soon.
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May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The story sounds like it might be a good one but i could not get past the first paragraph because of all the typos and misuse of words, and tenses. You really need to get a beta before continuing on with this story!
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May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This sounds like an interesting story. I've never been a beta before, but I could try if you couldn't find anyone else. I love the idea of a vengeful Harry. Are all the Weasleys going to be Harry's enemies, including the twins, Bill and Charlie?
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May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh I sooo can't wait for more! Who's murder was he framed for? How was Dumbledore able to access his accounts? Is he still about to? Chapter 2 please!