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I always love Top Harry. so I vote bottom Draco. I hope you get your chapters beta'd before you update. Your imagery is beautiful but your grammar is hard to make out or read around. The first chapter was wonderful. I'm excited about where you will go with this. Was Harry's crescent moon mark warped by dumbledore into a lightning bolt?

love it!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

i want draco to be bottom!

nice story. update soon!

Don't let this disencorage you from writing, but you need a new beta for chapter one and chapter two needs some serious work.

If my english was any good I would volunteer, but my grammar and my spelling are horrible.

Best of luck.

Wow. Seems really interesting right now!!! Uwahh! What's going to happen?! And darn them for putting Harry in Azkaban!! TT___TT And he's only 14!! I can't wait to see how your story will unfold!!

Hmmm...I wouldn't mind reading the unbeta version. Besides, you could always go back and change it. Ahaha. I like your dedication. I truly can't wait to read the rest of your story!

another good chapter!

Absolutly loved it, What about Fairy for draco's creature?

i could beta if you want and personally i would love to see a harry/draco pairing for some reason its been mostly draco/harry for a while anyway my email is ainsmacd@gmail.com

This could be a great story, but I think you should try to be more descriptive on the appearance of people, their personalities and places where they are, this helps (at least I think) the reader imagine better the character and were they are. You said that your queen serenity it's not form sailor moon.. but the moment I read the name it was her face that I see in your queen... Well... enough of critique... I love Draco/Harry fanfics! I think they are so cute together!! I think this fanfic has great potential and I hope Harry get his revenge on Dumbledore and all Weasleys ... (minus the twins ... I like them ...) I want to read more of this story! Update soon!!