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May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Shez:
Exquisite as usual. It was so easy, at least for me, to project myself into Sinistra's shoes. Well Done!
"I would see him cross the grounds like an elegant black spectre, going nowhere but further and further into his thoughts."
"I do regret my patience. Some virtues are overrated."
Another story to mark and read again, and again, and again.
Thank you so much!
Exquisite as usual. It was so easy, at least for me, to project myself into Sinistra's shoes. Well Done!
"I would see him cross the grounds like an elegant black spectre, going nowhere but further and further into his thoughts."
"I do regret my patience. Some virtues are overrated."
Another story to mark and read again, and again, and again.
Thank you so much!
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May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
How sad and touching. I loved way you weaved the patience into the story, and Snape. So, sad... I hate stories where he dies.
Great job.
Great job.
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May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent payback. Very creative, Pitt. Snape creates his own filth for cleaning. LOL. As much as I cringe over a gay Snape, the story was well done (of course) and I enjoyed the read.
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May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yikes, I just realized LaBib wrote the chapter I just reviewed and not Pittwitch. Sorry LaBib. All the kudos I said go to you. Maddie.
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May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sooo Naughty!! Luved it, from the red leather jacket, right down to Lucius's tight, ivory bum and beyond.
I always saw Lucius as a bottom ;D
I always saw Lucius as a bottom ;D
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May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh LaBib: I absolutely adore this. I can read it again and again. Narcissa getting her comeuppance all at the behest of her truly Machiavellan husband. And, see! You can write slash, and write it well.
Thanks so much for playing along. This was a fantastic response.
Pitt
Thanks so much for playing along. This was a fantastic response.
Pitt
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May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahem, excuse me, but wasn't it LaBibliographe who said she couldn't write Snape to save her life? Liar, liar, pants on fire!
Ha! Very good! You certainly get a decent revenge on Narcissa in this story, and the last section is droolworthy in the extreme. I love Narcissa sticking together in very unpleasant places! Poor dear girl, heh.
Ha! Very good! You certainly get a decent revenge on Narcissa in this story, and the last section is droolworthy in the extreme. I love Narcissa sticking together in very unpleasant places! Poor dear girl, heh.
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May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I'm a sucker for Snucius. I loved the ending, especially that out two men got what they needed and Narcissa got what she deserved.
Good job.
Good job.