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for The Seven Deadly Sins

by pittwitch

person scaranda
schedule May 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Greed v Charity
Always supected that Tonks was a wanton, and Percy was a perv; now you have proven the fact! Very entertaining. Epcially liked the way you referred to her, from Percy's POV, as 'Just Tonks'. Well done!!
person scaranda
schedule May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wrath & Patience.
A beautifuly paced and totally believable story.
Well done.
Scaranda
person scaranda
schedule May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Pride & Humility

Lucius is such a natural bottom for Snape, I always think. All that laquered arrogance just waiting to be stripped away by one who knows better, one who is actually in control instead of just pretending to be. As to Narcissa, I always fancied Snape would have nothing but disdain for her, disdain that she would mistake for respect or awe, or anything other than what it was.
Well done!
schedule May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Envy & Kindness: The bitchy wit in this is fantastic - I can hear Snape's drawl in the dialogue. Very interesting take on past lives and loves! Thanks for the read, Scaranda!
schedule May 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely twisted, Scaranda. What a way to read into their relationships -- and utterly believable IMHO. Fair is foul and foul is fair -- nothing is ever what it seems on the surface.

Well done!

Thanks for writing along ...

Pitt
schedule May 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story, just loved it. I always wondered why Arthur and Lucius hated one another so much. Now I know.
schedule May 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM

Envy and Kindness - by Scaranda
This tale cracked me up immediately. Lucius presented as a self-important, clueless slowtop was hilarious. The way Snape really almost takes care of him yet is supremely uninterested in the very attributes everyone else seems to find mesmerizing was quite interesting. What would make Snape stay friends with such an idiot
schedule May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Pride and Humilty

LaBib this was wonderful! Lucius is a downright cunning bastard, teaching his wife a lesson that way. Then he spoils her at the spa. He never lets her forget who is boss though.
schedule May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wrath and Patience

Aw Shez, this story has such sad poignancy. It
schedule May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wrath and Patience by Sheherazade/LibertyElyot

Oooh, I could feel the fierce presence of Snape as he said,