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May 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
as far as I can tell it starts intresting
hope to read more soon as well as your other stories
hope to read more soon as well as your other stories
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May 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit at first I wasn't too sure about a Harry Potter/Superman crossover,but I think you did it wonderfully. Can't wait for more.
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May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
cool, rarely i have see a superman crossover, i have read a smallville crossover.
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May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That's the biginning to an amazing story and plot line! I'd love to read more of it ^_^ Keep up the good work and can;t wait for the next chapter!
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May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, you got a least one reviewer!!! I like it, and I am very interested in knowing where this story is going. Like, I wonder why the police are after him.
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May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i like this idea. i'm excited for the next chapter. =)
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May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cool! I like this story.
So is it still the same year as the HP-verse?
So is it still the same year as the HP-verse?
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May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story! I cant wait to read more! Keep up the good work!
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May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have never read a cross-over like this before. I must say that by this first chapter I am intrigued. I like it!
Usually I am not a fan of first person narratives, but that seems to work very well for this story and doesn't bother me at all. Your writing style seems good and you had very few, if any, grammar and spelling mistakes. The scene was set up very well.
Looking forward to seeing where this little story goes!
Kudos!
Usually I am not a fan of first person narratives, but that seems to work very well for this story and doesn't bother me at all. Your writing style seems good and you had very few, if any, grammar and spelling mistakes. The scene was set up very well.
Looking forward to seeing where this little story goes!
Kudos!
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May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it. It's an unusual cross-over and i'm excited to see if it works! Your first chapter is very intreguing.