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September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
More more, god i love harry's character. Please update soon. And which idiot would be fooled by a pair of glasses, Superman? Lois Lane??
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September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just came across this story, and I can't wait to read more. I saw your warning before Chapter 1 about Harry's character, but at this point I don't really see him as being incredibly OOC (at least, not yet). He's a bit surly (sp?), but we saw that in canon book 5 and 6. The only OOC thin about Harry so far is his lack of curiosity. When I read OOC-ish stories I always think it's important that the changes in character be explained properly, which you've done quite well here. Harry was torn from everything he knew and comepletely isolated from his world; it makes sense that he'd be more withdrawn. One question: what is the time setting? You said you're basing this on the 1978 movie (which, I assume, takes place in 1978 - it's been a VERY long time since I've seen that one), but Harry would turn 23 in the year 2003. Did Harry's cross-reality travel include a time jump as well? Is the Superman plot moved up by a quater-century? So far, knowing the exact time hasn't been important, aside from the fact that if our Harry/narrator had found himself 20+ years in the past, you think he would have mentioned it in Chapter 1 when he was describing his new world. Mostly it's just my own curiosity - I like to visualize, and a lot changed about American culture in that time span. Anyway, thanks for the story (I love crossovers!), and I look forward to your next post. :)
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September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
'llo, I like this story but I'm just curios why it isn't in the crossover category. You expressed i worry over not getting enough readers so I backtracked. I only found this story because I was reading one of your others. Now that that's out of the way I do really like this story, I like your Harry who has no trouble striping someone to find out what's wrong but once that's done starts to get caught up with the fact that there is an attractive naked man in front of him. Potter luck and all that, of course Clark would be interested in him. both are very in character which can be hard in a crossover. I hope you find time to write
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September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's good to see another update. I like where you took the story so far, and the humor is quite amusing. You play the two characters as well as you can, in your new setting and world, which is refreshing. I can't wait to see how much more Harry will regret "removing the green shard from his butt.." :P
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September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A good story, but just one thing... magic DOES exist in the Superman universe, it's been used against the Man of Steel many times and is one of his few 'weaknesses'.
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September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really loving this so far. And I adore Harry's attitude. Sups needs to take a hint. HA! Keep it up!
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September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting!!
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September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
w00t for serious chapters. The ideas are great, it'll be fun to watch Harry and SuperMan get along.
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September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i really love how original this story is.. the only complaint i have is that you take forever to update :(
please update again soon i cant wait to see what happens :)
please update again soon i cant wait to see what happens :)
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August 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just found this. Please continue it sometime soon. It sounds awesome so far. Later!