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by Lina03

person Kiiyouko
schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story. I'm glad you updated. I hope you update again. Keep up the good work.
person misaki
schedule October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nice! i like it! please let me know when there's an update.
person lantana
schedule October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. Must be the best way to seduce (however unknowingly) superman: playing hard to get...
schedule October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WAHOO! UPDATAGE! And a good one too! You made my night!! I just love how Clueless Morgan stalks Harry. :P
schedule October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it, it's funny. More more!
schedule October 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loves it!
person Livingshadow
schedule September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really good XD
can't wait for the next chapter XD
schedule September 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow, this is new. I've read a few HP/Superman fics and this was a first 'healer' and 'drop out of the sky' thing. I can't wait to see what you/muse think up. :) It seems like Clark will be the annoying type to bug him at every turn.
Dahlias
person Aalto
schedule September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this, you write well. Yes it was short, but it's good as well. Update soon-er.
person neris
schedule September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So far so good. There is not enough crossover stories between HP and Superman, usually it's HP and Smallville, so your idea is very refreshing.
Other than that, there is really not much to say. (I tend to write a lot more when there is something I don't like or something that I'd like to change in a story).

I can only congratulate you on your skills. Good writing, interesting plot and realistic dialogs and characters that are believable. I wouldn't change anything and won't even try to give you any ideas, because you seem to be doing great on your own.

Well, maybe there was just one thing that I didn't understand, a small inconsistency. When Harry arrived to this new world, his magical core was depleted. He couldn't find a magical community to help him heal. But later on he can conjure money and heal people and do all kinds of magic. But I guess he got better during his journey across the USA.