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for A Serpent's Possesion

by mystique

person kitty08
schedule May 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow great start and I am very curiouse how Draco will get Hermione to marry him... please update soon!!!
schedule May 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow very hot story so far, please update again soon!
schedule May 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love it so far and it could be better but if she is supposed to hate him and be weary of him isnt she as an auror in dangerous times be wary of suspects especially malfoy, she should have been majorly hesistant and worried and on her guard not giving in that easy, it came like all that info you gave on her background as a warrior and a thinker went away. Even if draco was being cordial, he would have to win her over with alot of work to convince she is in no danger. Just a suggestion but i do like your fic and i am a sucker for a dominant draco like fish to water.