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for A Looping of the Scales ~ COMPLETED

by Ms_Figg

person MysticAngel
schedule September 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh I'm so glad the arrogant hermione didn't last that long! I think that was pretty in character for one big outburst and then to have her realize something fishy was going on. Phew :) This is quite an adventure you've put together so far! I check at least 3 times a day to see if you've updated, haha. Goodluck with your writing, see you next chapter.
person Anon
schedule September 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love the Secret Garden reference! I swear I thought of him even before the Robin showed up, and then I was thinking "No way..."
And then he said his name and I got really excited, haha.

Nice job! :)
person Audra
schedule September 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ben Weatherstaff.... isn't that the groundskeeper from The Secret Garden? Eagerly awaiting future chapters!
schedule September 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh so they're twigging.

Can't wait to see if the demons get the chance to really set in to anybody before they can sort them out.

person Tenar10r
schedule September 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
what a wicked turn of events!
person Grid
schedule September 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes!! That`s Hermione. Such a smart girl really. Now the hard part.. is getting Ginny confess Lust hahaha.

I`ve been wondering wich sins is for the rest of them... Blaise greed probably... anger is another but I don`t know for who... Maybe is better if I just wait. Awsome story.

I`m sorry that I havn`t leave a review in.. ages...
person honeybee
schedule September 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whew..they finally know. I was wondering how long you would let them stew. It makes sense that Hermione figured it out; not because she is the smartest, bute because she always seemed introspective to me, someone who looks into her own actions. I'm glad that they know, I was starting to feel really bad about the whole thing. I'm eager to see how they are going to deal with the demons.
person Funky Fairy
schedule September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh...I love "The Secret Garden" Nice touch!
person Kimberly
schedule September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ben Weatherstaff!!! from a secret garden! He communicated with the robin, right? LOL..I think he's a ghost in your story and that is how he got through the wards. A ghost still able to interact with the physical world. I love this story so much, it is awesome! Can't wait for the next installment.
person yria
schedule September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi Ms Figg !!!

I need to ask you : is Snape going to stay forever young in this story? I dont`t know why, but I want to see him 40-thy years old... and how he is going to deal with his feelings for Hermione in sytuation, when his memory will be back. I just miss old Snape ;-]