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lol! he's my favorite character from the secret garden! and you brought the bird, even! you know the boy who played draco in the movies also played colin in the newest movie.

Magi Silverwolf: No, I didn't have any idea that the same actor played both roles. I'm going to have to find that movie. :)

woooo! I wasn't expecting that last part! maybe hermione's fantasy? quite interesting.

Wow, awesome story! Hermione, Severus and the others taking on supernatural evil forces, definitely an original idea, I've never run across a story quite like this one! Good thing Hermione so quickly realized what was wrong with her and instantly acted to alert the others to their predicament. Blaise is such a danger even without insidious supernatural influence, but Draco's wide array of vices combined with his ingrained sense of Pureblood superiority could spell tragedy if the others are unable to get through to him. I'm absolutely fascinated, can't wait for your next update!

Here's another worry about Ron; if he continues to eat like that, it's very possible he could rupture his gastroesophageal junction which would cause internal bleedeing.

Sorry. Old healthcare worker here (now in clinical research YAY). I actually have seen this happen a few times.

Lady Zombie: Thank you so much. I was going to do a bit of research on the dangers of overeating, because I knew there had to be something. You can't do that to your body constantly. This isn't a matter of him sitting down and having a huge meal a couple of times a day and gaining weight, he's constantly eating. I already established he didn't look good, so this information is perfect to utilize if I let it get too far. I don't know that I will and thank goodness for healing spells and potions. I really appreciate you pointing that out for me and YAY for clinical reseatch. :))))

I loooove the conversation!

Very nice detailing of all their sins.

Chapter was not too long-winded at all. Sensible conversation among the characters fit in nicely.

Another great chappie luv. I think Wrath is one of Ron's sins as well though, and there are actually nine virtues. The two you missed are Prudence and Obedience. Also, since the demons basically said that Severus was a reborn soul and basically pure in an earlier chappie, he would be really useful in the banishing along with Harry and Susan. *shrug* Just ideas though. Write it how you like, I'll still read every word and ask for more. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Astraea

LadyFireCrab: You are right. There were differences in the sins and virtues, but I decided to stick with the basic seven rather than nine since seven represents a more spiritual number than nine, which represents a more physical er following. Actually, neither here or there since it's all fiction if you get down to it. I stuck with the basic Catholic rendering. Either would have worked but I prefered seven.