rate_review Reviews

Great story! I love reading about young Snape and Hermione, either because of a timeturner or deaging. I am disappointed they are not both inexperienced, because you don't read that too often with these two, and it would have been so much fun and hot to read! I had hoped this was the case when Ron said in (the 4th or 5th chapter) that Hermione hadn't done it with him, so that's a small but big inconsistency.

Snape getting a new start and enjoying it, going shopping and getting his hair done, was much fun!

Congratulations! Much luck and health to the grandbabies :)

Snakelette: Thank you for pointing out that continuity error. It was in chapter 4. I fixed it. Glad you are enjoying the story ***

You're welcome :)

Just sad you fixed chapter 4 and not the later part. I love first times (call it a kink *grin*) and this plot would have been perfect for it.

Snakelette: I understand perfectly how you feel about the first time scenario, but I thought I'd do something slightly different this time. I've been doing that lately with my stories. Hermione is still relatively "innocent" when it comes to sex. She's not a virgin, but she's not had any good experiences sexually either. She just did it once. And we don't yet know what Snape knows about sex . . . although I'm sure Voldemort has given him some rather twisted instruction. It will still work out. (I hope) ****

Ooh, you're making me very curious about what's to come!

Oh, I missed Adam :) I'm so glad you dragged him out of the closet, lol.

Nice to see Adam and Victor again.

hehe yay! adam is back! i missed him =]

YAY for adam being back! love the story so far; keep it up!

OMG! Victor and Adam!!! Love it! Can't wait for the next update :)