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thanks for the chapter!

Sorry that I haven't been reviewing regularly, but time's been an issue lately. I do love the way you've bent Severus' character without the added burden of twenty years of tension and suspicion weighing him down. The 'pissing contest' between him and Ron is very believable, as is his slow acceptance of Harry. That was one blind spot that always bothered me in the novels--can an adult really blame a child for the sins of the father so bitterly? Just seemed unreasonable to me, but I suppose it does happen. I also like the idea of Lucius becoming his patron instead of Riddle. I imagine it will signifigantly change the directions of his studies for his Mastery.

What a mean cliffhanger! Update soon! I really like this story.

I just finished chapter 15 and read your note at the bottom.

10 Grandchildren!! Congratulations!

I have no children of my own, but thanks to my 4 sibs, I have 10 nieces & nephews, and 6 grands with one grand on the way. Ain't life grand? *snicker*

Well, on to the rest of the chapters...

OOOOO! Wicked Ms.Figg for stopping before we found out what Snape's animagus form was!!!! *heehee* :)

Please tell me he isn't an Ourobouros, (even though constantly chewing on himself would be totally in character.)Creature change triggered by primal feelings of anger, rage, pain, loss and greif? Great, now I have to find a bestiary! Good chapter.

VoraciousReader: lol. I didn't mean to imply that Snape's Animagus form requires pain, loss, and anger, but that Snape needed to release that in order to connect with his inner self. It was holding him back from transforming.

This is Excellent! More Please!!!!

Noooooo! evil cliffhanger :) Excited to see what you have him turn into.

wow I like this side better. why can't JK Rowling have done that, Snape and harrt getting along Funny but cute.