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Maybe he could... stop... using her full name all the time? I'm hearing it oddly in my head. "You're a special witch, Hermione Granger. I'll wait as long as you'd like, Hermione Granger. Please let me renovate this hidden room and make it a shrine to you... Hermione Granger."

Excellent bombardment of chapters, keep going at this pace and I'll just keep hitting the refresh button until a new one pops up.

ooohhhhh Hermione is gonna get hers! hehehe great as always my dear!

Bonny: Lol. I hadn't realized I used her full name twice in that manner. :) I write so quickly sometimes I lose the flow because I'm feeling the conversation. The comment that she was special should have been followed just by her first name. The final statement, her full name. I'll fix that. Thanks for pointing it out. ***

happy that severus is seeing her in a new light!

You know, I've always liked the Severus/Hermiony pairings because they have so many things in common, it just seems to be an excellent match. While Ron would always be impressed by her font of knowledge and leaps of logic, Severus would challenge and match her. A much more equal coupling.

Hmm, a Gryffin? That's pretty cool. I like how Snape is opening up and letting go. Nicely done.

I really Love your story YOu are amazing

I love the fact that Severus is making the ointment for Mr. Filch. I always felt rather sorry for Filch.

I love it! More please!

Hmmm, I always wondered why Hermione didn't bother discovering her animagus form, I mean she is always desperate to learn new things, to challenge herself. Is that her next step? Maybe as an aside to her studying? Or an expansion/application/test of her theories, justified since this is for her Transfiguration NEWT? Could she also become something amazing, a dragon, perhaps?

All that "wondering out loud" can be translated plainly as: Oooooh! I'm so into this damn story. Please please please please please PLEASE let Hermione become a really cool animagus too! A dragon! Foreshadowing! Oh PLEEEAASE!!!

It's not exactly mature, but that was my immediate reaction that I then tried to subtly work into your developing plot.

... PLEASE!!!

I really like this story. I was wondering do you think Hermione will have an animagus form as well? It may help her test her theory from her point of view.