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I feel like your loosing focus. what does ron have to do with the plot? it would be interesting to continue exploring this topic, but maybe as a separate fic.

Hi elladee: You know, I really was hesitant to have Ron find his form so quickly . . . until I figured out what it was going to be and imagined all the fun scenarios, and I just couldn't help myself. I think I locked on to something when rage had something to do with Severus' transformation, so I just ran with it, trying to draw it out with suspense within the chapter, then doing the big REVEAL, which really, just leaves laughter and more questions. Ron as an Orangutan is funny, but you know, it's not that bad a form for an ordinary animal. And there's something about a primate that can really be funny, especially with how close it is to human anatomy. lololol. Need I say more? I probably will in the story, but thanks so much for commenting. I'm really glad you're enjoying the story. ***

Hi Jayne Elizabeth: It's not that I'm losing my focus. I prefer stories that are three dimensional, and unless the characters are stranded on an island or imprisoned together in some manner, there should be interaction with others. Not boring interaction either. Let's face it, Ron was important in Hermione's life, and he's not just going to disappear and he's going to have feelings about what's happening with her and Snape. So, in my opinion, what's going on with him is not only interesting, but intergral to a well rounded story. It works into the storyline well, and has the potential to provide some great comedy relief while our fav couple gets their stuff together. Basically, I write what I personally enjoy, and I like a bit of character interaction, especially when I've been divisive with them. It humanizes the situation. It's not that I've lost my focus, reality dictates that people have lives, and those lives should be reflected if you're trying to write about life, even if it's fantasy. It make it so much better in my opinion. Thank you for your honest comments. They are appreciated. ***

HA HA HA omg ron is an ape!!!!!! ok so i am reading one of your other stories called yuleride and therer is a part in there where ron is getting help with his sex life from bill and he tells bill he likes banana and bill says an ape like you would ha ha thats great and here you made his animagus form an ape oh thats good

smurphy: LOL! I'd forgotten all about that! Too funny!! :)))

I am very much enjoying this story and am so glad you did not throw Ron under the bus on the Animagus issue. Yes and Orangutan is kinda funny and matches his colouring but pointing out the tool use and intelligence of the creature doesn't make Ron a buffoon. *bad pun*

mmmkay, i take back my comment about ron. if you writing about ron makes great chapters like this then please continue.

oh, and you want to know what else stopped while I was reading this? my heart! ack!! they are each others yin & yang, which is why I love hg/ss so much.

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Wooh! Thanks for updating!

eech no one wants to be smelled. Besides I don't know if birds can smell well and he does have bird head...wierd

polka dot: lol. Yes, he does have a bird's head when he's transformed. But his human senses have been heightened. A gryffin is a hunter and a magical crossbreed. More than likely it has both a powerful sense of smell like a lion, and sharp eyesight like a raptor.