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for A Looping of the Scales ~ COMPLETED

by Ms_Figg

schedule June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the chapter!
person english_tea
schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good story I LIKE IT LOL Thanks
person neelix
schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lmao... I did get my hopes up a little, then I remmbered the gryffin!! Brilliant as usual.
schedule June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
First of all, I loved that song!! How beautiful!! How appropriate, I love this new Severus, he isn't holding back anything. The title was not misleading at all, to me atleast. I think it is just a little too early for them to "spread their wings" Though I may not review every chapter (SORRY, I know I am a bad reader =( I eagerly wait for every chapter and check AFF several times a day for your updates. I love this story just as much as the rest of your stories. You have a wonderful gift, thank you for sharing it with us.
person VoraciousReader
schedule June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Glad Ron finally took a peek at the world without his ass in the way! I like this version of Ron, at least he has some potential. The innuendo can continue as much you like, it's fun to see Severus learning to flirt. And the bit about Neville translating for him was great!
person english_tea
schedule June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love you again............
schedule June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
loved it!! thanks for the chapter!!
person honeybee
schedule June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whew! *fans herself with a newspaper* That was hot...just imagining Severus Snape walking up to me and saying "I can smell you" does things to my hormonal balance.
person neelix
schedule June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Holy moley, that was some first kiss! He's so seductive, how could she resist him? Awesome!!
person elladee
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hahahah great twist! At first I was a little bit disappointed that Ron found his Animagus form already, it seemed too easy... but you made me love it as soon as you revealed his form haha!!

Anyway, I've been reading this story since you posted the first chapter last month, but it was all read-and-run up to now so this is my first review! ;P Great premise, engaging dialogue, and interesting developments! While I'm also a fan of WIKTT-type SS/HG fics, as well as fics that take place after Hermione has graduated from Hogwarts, I very much like this concept of matching a young Snape with Hermione. The way you've written him is great!

I'm looking forward to the next chapters (your daily updates are awesome btw)! Thanks for a great story~ :D