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for A Looping of the Scales ~ COMPLETED

by Ms_Figg

person lemontwist
schedule June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant writing as usual. This last chapter has been my favorite by far. I love the langlock jinx... there are days when I wish I could use that one at work ;)
person VoraciousReader
schedule June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting take on Blaise. I think they should obliviate him before he gets even nastier. Loved the exit when she bolted.
person use2b2t2
schedule June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
As always Mrs Figg, I enjoy your stories. This one is interesting and you are building up everything nicely. Keep it up. And um, I was not keeping track with the jewels though I agree withyou that Snape is ahead. I hope SS and HG have an awesome showdown at the end of their review!

Mare
person VoraciousReader
schedule June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, static trap spells--this could get nasty. Loving it, the age line was great!
schedule June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
loved it!! thanks for the update!!
person Robin
schedule June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
First of all - GREAT story. I love it. That's just a turn to the story - your imagination is absolutely awesome. And your speed! Gods help me if I have ever seen an author as quick as you.
Please write on. Oh, and congratulations to your new grandchildren.

I just noticed something about the Boggart: it turns into Fred because it sees/senses Ron. Yes. But all the people around - Harry as well - also see Fred. Only when the Boggart is after Harry does it turn into Voldemort. That's also how you can ridicule/craze a Boggart: don't try to fight all on your own. Maybe you're lucky and it can't decide which form to take and tries to be both at the same time. If you don't know what I mean, read it up in HP III.
person Ms_Figg
schedule June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Robin: Big error on the nature of Boggarts, there. Sigh. But, I'm going to leave it for now. Now that I think about it I do remember either reading something or hearing something about a Boggart becoming confused and changing shapes when facing more than one opponent. Drat. But thank you for pointing it out. It will help Boggart-kind in the future. :)
person Embir_lily
schedule June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You write the best snape/hermione fics i cant wait to read this
person polka dot
schedule June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
should hermoine be sprouting a beard. That's a bit unusual. Very cute chapter
person Ms_Figg
schedule June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
polka dot: According to the HP lexicon, it seems the age line makes everyone sprout a beard. lol. I think that's the punishment part of the spell.