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Bring on the smut sooooooooooooooon!!!!! Good job getting there, though.

I might be off on the timeline but I think SS has only been young for a couple of weeks now and they're already wanking off to each other?

polka dot: Well, in Severus' mind, he's been young a lot longer than two weeks, and Hermione is the first accessible witch he's encountered, and he has been kissing her . . . and wants to do more, sooo yeah he's wanking off.

Hermione's infatuated by him and sexually attracted to him. Sexual feelings need to be relieved. Naturally they'd think about each other. It would be strange if they didn't.

And in case you think it odd that they feel like this so soon, keep in mind that there are people who meet and have sex the same day. And they are both young adults, and emotions run high most of the time. It's been about 3 or 4 weeks . . . but desire has no timeline. lol.

Hermione is having a harder time with her feelings than Severus. She wants to, but she's having issues with it.

C'mon... it's the big 4.0. They have to get together soooooon!!!!!!! Please, please, please continue this fantabulous work and make sure there is some real, real, real lemony smut (a.k.a hot sex) in the next chapter --- well, SS/HG, that is.

loved the chapter!!

Ooooooh... YES! Nice one, this chapter. I pretty like the direction Hermione's - and Severus' - thoughts are going.
One of the best stories I've read so far. Awesome.
Please more - I'll give you a chocolate cookie if that helps ;-)

Hello Miss Figg, I finally discovered that we could actually send you reviews! I've been reading your stories for what seems like forever, half the time not even realizing they were by the same author. I read fanfiction, burningpen, and adultfanfiction on a regular basis, and I have to say you're by far the most talented author on those sites that I've read. You keep in line with the true characters, and you make me laugh constantly. I've only read your HG/SS stories, but I think you're talent really shows through when you take a more serious tone with your stories. Ever since I've discovered this story I've checked everyday, and I'm very happy to say that I haven't been dissapointed. Keep on doing your amazing work, I look forward to more of your stories :)

gotta say I'm disappointed in Harry. How did he manage to save the world?

polka dot: Harry did all right, and he didn't save the wizarding world alone. He had a lot of help, not to mention the powerful Elder Wand. So he had "magical aids" as well as people behind him. :)

loved it!! snape is such a gentelman to hermione!!