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for A Looping of the Scales ~ COMPLETED

by Ms_Figg

person polka dot
schedule June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ron's stomach and penis seem to have a direct connection. Oh well as long as he's good in the cupboard...
schedule June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Glad eveyone is finding their other half!!
person Ms_Figg
schedule June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol, polka dot: There does seem to be a connection between Ron's stomach and penis, due to a bit of food magic. Apparently, he did quite well in the cupboard, even after the magic wore off. Good for him! And for loving the big girls. :)
person MND
schedule June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Susan and ron is a great couple... great chapter
person hgelman
schedule June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love your stories - they are always great. I just wanted to write a note because I love how you are portraying Ron. It's fun to see an evil Ron in order to get him out of the way but it is really interesting that this time it really is (sort of) Hermione's fault. Well, that's it - great story - now I am back to reading!
person Ms_Figg
schedule June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi hgelman: I'm glad you like the portrayal of Ron. :) He's a good guy really. As I told another reviewer, I've bashed, slashed and killed off Ron so many times, it's gotten boring. A lot of people believe I hate him. I really don't. He's just inconvienent most of the time. Thanks for dropping a note. It's appreciated. ***
person hgelman
schedule June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok-now I am caught up. Speaking as a fat girl - yeah Ron!!!!!!
person Serpant13
schedule June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, it's great to see someone appreciating bigger girls as well!
Also the Hermione/Severus interaction is brilliant. Can't wait to find out how it goes between them.
person neelix
schedule June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Does this mean we get some lemons soon? I find their growing awareness of each other very touching, actually, and the slow move towards this has been great!
person Anon
schedule June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gods what a boy! What a real gentleman! I wish there were more men like this around ;-)
I really like the way you build those scenes and tension.
Thanks for a real *love* story.
Oh, and Ron... Well Ron seems to be Ron. Lucky boy. Nice idea about the magic food.
Maybe there are some asphrodisiacs under all that sight-enhancing food ...