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for A Looping of the Scales ~ COMPLETED

by Ms_Figg

person VoraciousReader
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"Susan Weasley" sound a lot better than 'Hermione Weasley', although when I took a look at the epilogue in DH, there really isn't anything there to indicate that Hermione and Ron got married. There is one ambiguous comment about inheriting her mother's brains to his daughter, but that's it. However, Lavender or Luna were both not far behind Hermione in grades and so could also be the kid's mom. Just a justification for all we put Hermione through so often! LOL.
person polka dot
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
there are plenty of guys who like their ladies a little plump. I don't think Ron will get any flak.
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOUR STORIES! They are so well written. Please don't stop writing! It makes my day to read the latest chapter!
person HermioneDiggory
schedule June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I haven't visited AFF in quite a while, otherwise I'd never have missed this gem! I love the way you slowly built the Severus/Hermione relationship rather than have them hop in the sack right away. And Severus' DADA "practice" session in the RoR was hilarious...until Blaise took things way too far. Even though the battle is over with Hermione the clear victor, I'm not sure Blaise is ready to let it go. I hope Hermione never has to prove that she really can kill if need be, but I'm afraid it sounds as if that may happen at some point.

Fantastic story, I will definitely be back looking for your next update!
person Robin
schedule June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Ms_Figg, you are simply amazing. I love reading your story.
Your (and Severus') thoughtfulness is overwhelming ;-)
It is really nice to see the scene developing and not just rushed through as it sometimes happens with other stories.
You really now how to write.

PS: I didn't mean to be mean with you; that was just a joke - honestly
schedule June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
im glad they are taking their time! they shouldnt rush their first time together!! Thanks!!
person neelix
schedule June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was almost salivating.... ! VERY nice update.... And I forgive you. Foreplay is good.
person Ashley
schedule June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Torture Ms.Figg, absolute torture.
person AnneMarie
schedule June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You ARE doing this to torture me!!! Lol. I keep this story open on my iPod and refresh the current chapter all day long. (and night) my toddler just woke up for a pacifier- and I check it. :) more please!! I love this one
schedule June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So needless to say, I love this story!!! But then again, I love all of your Severus/Hermione stories! There is something about this one that has completely captivated me. A not so confident Severus, willing to befriend people he thinks he should hate. Looking at things in better light, becoming more confident, comfortable in his own skin. If you run out of cherry cigarellos ( I know how you need them to write these fantastic stories) don't hesitate to email me and I will send you a case, as long as you update as regularly as you do!!! I will gladly feed your habit if you will but only feed mine! I go through withdraw when I don't see your updates everyday!!!!