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for A Looping of the Scales ~ COMPLETED

by Ms_Figg

person honeybee
schedule July 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Severus in Aleister Crowley's mansion...you know I love you,right?
schedule July 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nice chappies :)

i so enjoy reading em
person Suzy Q
schedule July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved the most recent chapter. It was so awesome... Idk. Haha. Just keep it goin. Please. Haha.
person LDeakins
schedule July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ohh wow.. Um,...Damn girl I need more smokes after that one!!
person LDeakins
schedule July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
And now something I NEVER do, I never post abuse in a review but a small minded and petty creature took the name "lover" and made several inane and innacurate comments about this story and about my darling Figgy. What planet did you grow up on? Teens are idiots.. I call it hormonal stupidity, I have warned my own daughter about it since she was 6, warned her that yes, it would infect her as well, but I would point it out when she fell into that teen idiocy trap. Teen boys are enamored with their cock and balls, Hell GROWN men are just as enamored. and teen boys are just as eaten up with the need to fit in, and anything that is differant is wrong, most boys will be more than happy to pull out the olf "Faggot sign" when they meet some guy that doesnt fit into their idea of tab A fits into slot B..
And teen girls.. Dear God, can we talk about vile vicious jealose creatures? When did you last sit back and watch a click making the life of someone not "Cool enough" compleatly miseriable? Thye spread rumors, the manipulate and revile, just so they can keep up the illusion that the world revolves around themselves. In this story, Figgy has caught that teen angst and uncertainty, she opens a window that most of us only remember, but some of her readers are still dealing with on a daily basis. Lover you are wrong, I have to say it, but it's your opinion, and like ass's everyone has one, it's just that the rest of us have the good sense to keep ours clean and manageable, wish you could learn to do the same.
person Tenar10r
schedule July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hotter than asphalt in the Mississippi summer sun!
schedule July 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i know u said snape wont grow up in this, but i think that would be a good way to end the story. let me share what i have in my head

slughorn thinks he finally found the reversal potion, snape and hermione fight about it (either hermione thinks it would be goood for him or snape wants to become who he really is). eventually snape takes it, but nothing happens. bummer. later in the day snape and hermione are having a sad "i'd love you either way" shag, and snape starts to change back, mid-coitus. even though hes just transformed to his old self they keep shagging (b/c he remembers everything). then when theyre done having sex snape feels guilty, like he manipulated a student, and hermione must (once again) win him over.

yeah, i'd write it myself except i'm a shit writer, so i just read others stuff.

btw, b/c of all ur writings ms. figg, i cried every single goddamn time snape was on screen when i saw the movie yesterday. the end
schedule July 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh, and btw, this is a response to the 'lover' comment;

i'm fat... and gay, and i think ms. figg handles her characters wonderfully. i have read almost every single story on her website, and i'll continue to read them until she stops writing them. ms. figg is the best damn writer on aff.net b/c she is so accurate, boys are that homophobic and skinny girls make fun of fat girls. the fact that she tackles these topics is courageous, too often people simply ignore problems like that. plus (and i didnt discover this until recently) she responds to her reviews, when so many other authors ignore feedback.

so yeah! stfu! >=p (lol, i couldnt resist a little immaturity!)
person Ms_Figg
schedule July 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Jayne Elizabeth: You CRIED? Like "rock star" cried or like "DH sadness" cried? I can't wait to see the movie. I'll be glad for every glance of Rickman/Snape I can get. I understand the longing for Snape to turn back adult, a lot of people have asked about that, but the key point of the plot bunny to this story is that he never turns back and I think that's what sold me on it. A permanent, new beginning for him. (Where have I heard New Beginning before?) lol.
schedule July 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol, it was kind of like a "why does no one understand him, he's gonna save the world" cry and my friend (who hasnt read the books) was all hating on snape and I was like "no!, he saves the world, you would know that if you knew how to read!"
ack, im now fiercely loyal to snape, which is why I hate the 7th book, i feel like even J.K. got caught up in her own 'snape sucks' mentality. not my snape you bitch!!

in regards to looping of the scales, i'll just have the story end that way in my head. so whenever you finish (and get back to dark lady, lol) i'll just finish it again my way in my head. yup, and it will be fantasmic!

lurv,
big ol' gay fat juicy ass girl