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for A Looping of the Scales ~ COMPLETED

by Ms_Figg

person VoraciousReader
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOVED the image of her being thrown into the infirmary--I could really see it in my head, LMAO! This is good, but I still wonder what Slughorn is going to try to do about the 'youthening' potion? Be fun to see him get a double dose and end up as a chubby 2 year old!
person catstaff
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good for Harry, making Hermione face up to herself like that! And even better of him for forcing her to go be honest with Severus immediately, before she could think too much about it and not do it. He knows her so well.

~Catstaff
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ABOUT DAMN TIME FER HARRY TO TELL HER!

and yea she finally tells severus!

a nice emo chappie too!

schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah, good old bargaining for a kiss. Works wonders! :D

schedule August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor Harry!! Just even thinking about a mate shagging is enough to give you a sour stomach, but to see it when you weren't meant to be there..... I shudder to think!

Bless Severus for rushing to Hermione's aid with the Manticores.... I hope he'll be fine and well very soon, annoying ans seducing her all the more!!

More very soon please, if your grandkids will let you!

ANGELWINGZ1983
schedule August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
first off.....i thought this was some other story i had been looking for.....i found out differently.


now...for some perks.......

chapter 33 was frigging funny!!!! hubby looked at me like i had lost my mind! so ya...............

for chappies 43, 44, & 45..............HOLY MOTHER OF GOD!! i actually raped hubby! and he was WILLING!!!!! *looks bug eyed* OOPS! didn't mean to ya that! *MAJOR BLUSHING*

chappie 53.............*nose-bleed central*

WOW! woman.....your imagination is.......*shakes head to clear it* DAMN!!!!

so please, please, please keep it up.


YOU ROCK!!!

person Jennifer
schedule August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You are one of my favorite authors out here...one of the best I have found. I hope the grandkids don't ware you out too much...I do want more updates...please make Hermione realize that she is in love with Severus soon...she needs to get her head out of her arse and understand that ambition is good but not at the exclusion of love.
person anncee
schedule August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
it was still a great chapter ms figg! you're an amazing writer!!! of course it was still good =] but now i'm just so darned worried for severus!! i hope he'll be ok!!
person VoraciousReader
schedule August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whew, glad he's all right! Will wait for more!
person Tenar10r
schedule August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHA Stomache Calming potion! Serves him right!