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for Mrs Malfoy

by booback

person Arodri59
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
it's cute! please, update when you can!
person kazfeist
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5 - Wonderful update! I love the baby girl, and can't wait to find out the story behind the little house and everything. I'm sure you have a great idea behind the curse, and how to cure it, too. :D
person WeDoNotSpeak
schedule May 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you and i have a problem. i have a unhealthy addiction to your story.
i need my fix
stop cliffhanging me
im literally hangin from a cliff...right now
person Anon
schedule May 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was doing just fine until I read that last bit of chapter 5 and saw the way Hermione reacted regarding her daughter and now I'm just sitting here wiping away tears. That was so beautiful and sweet and yet so heartwrenching too. What a wonderful story you've got going here. I mean I was sad that she's had to relive Ron cheating on her and losing her father all over again and I'm sure all that pain and sorrow isn't quite over yet but the bit with her daughter is what really got to me. I definitely look forward to reading more. I'll just have to move the tissue box a little closer to my desk. LOL Well done!
schedule May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like it. It's kind of the whole '50 First Dates' thing except better since they can some some semblence of a life. It's really funny because I just watched the movie last night lol. Anywyas great job so far, I can't wait to read more!
schedule May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Bah! Chapters... too... short! lol. Keep them rolling on out! Cant wait to read more :D
schedule May 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love your stories Charlie, I really do, but please tell me that this memory lost on her is just until Lucius Malfoy find out that this was a curse from Pansy or so another of Draco's jelous ex's.. A girl can only hope.. LOL Keep them coming and do not forget about Freedom pls
schedule May 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm bawling damn it.....what is wrong with her? how could they not know? she better not have a brain tumor....
schedule May 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really hope Hermione gets cured, that was bittersweet....
schedule May 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I look forward to reading more. I hope that Hermione gets her memories back soon and that she never has another relapse.