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for Mrs Malfoy

by booback

person Anon
schedule September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't even begin to imaigne what it would be like to have all these people paraded in front of you and told that you know them and that they've been part of your life and yet you're not sure of everything that's going on around you. It's so bittersweet but nothing on what I just read about poor Charlie. How utterly heartbreaking and devastating. I do hope he finds someone because while he clings on to that old love, he's never going to give a new love a chance. I know this is a Hermione/Draco story and I really wonder what Draco wants to speak to her about and how he'll deal with what he just saw (and possibly heard) but I really want to sit here and feel sad for Charlie now. What a lovely, thought provoking piece. :)
person Toriinwonderland
schedule September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon! I love this story so much!
person kazfeist
schedule September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah, he loves Hermione, doesn't he? Did he curse her, in a fit of pique?
person A
schedule September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really, really want to read more! Update soon, please. I knew Hermione was going to be pregnant, but the little girl was such a surprise. And poor Charlie. . .
person Mia
schedule September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Holy hell have I ever missed this. The update was a wonderful surprise. Stay busy, k? That would keep me elatedly happy. At first mention I thought Charlie was single because he batted for the other team. But now I'm leaning towards him crushing on Hermione. Kinda makes me wonder if he has something to do with her memory loss. You see what leaving me alone with my thoughts will do? All kinds of crazy imaginings. Thank you for the excellent entertainment again. You make me smile.

~Mia
schedule September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooooo, was Hermione cheating with Charlie? Is that why Rose needed a paternity test before they got married? Is that why Hermione had a silent memory of her and Draco fighting? And is charlie still in love with her? Or am I just reading waaaaaay too much into this? lol. Update soon please, I need answers to these questions!
schedule September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay first, Yay you updated! And second, I so totally have a theory about who it is that Charlie is talking about and one of Hermione's snipets. Anyway, really a great update, I can't wait for more!!
schedule September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG Charlie is in love with Hermione? OMG!!!!!! What a twist!!!!!
person Polka dot
schedule September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooo Hermione's been a naughty wife
schedule September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
:( aw, is Charlie in love with Hermione?
update soon!