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for Mrs Malfoy

by booback

person Citten
schedule October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
no please continue with the snip-bits!!!! i love them! i just wish you would have told us at the beginning of the chapter that you where do that cause i was really confused trying to figuare out what was going on, last chapter ended with them in the hallway at malfoy manor with her pregant. but i am up with you now so continue!!! :)
person katiekrm
schedule October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
More snippets, please!
person DracoIsMyDarkAngel
schedule October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i would deffo continue with the story the way it is, i was very glad indeed to see two update in two days, i love this story
person Anon
schedule October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'd prefer if you kept on writing. :) Of course, it's entirely up to you. Loved the flashbacks. :)
schedule October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please do not ended yet you have to cure Hermione fully, and we need more of those hot scene they are good.
person kazfeist
schedule October 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hooray for an update....and I'm still curious as to why she keeps forgetting! :D Can't wait for more.
person Citten
schedule October 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You so better not be ending it there! i really hope that you have lots of more chapters left!! :) i love that it is the anger moments that make her remember and that draco is patience and that he doesnot force those on her! :)
person Anon
schedule October 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwwwwwweeeeeee, so gosh darn cute! FINALLY! SHE REMEMBERS! It was perfect, I cruised right though the chapter, it was very smooth and easy to read. That's one of my biggest pet peeves; over detailes, wordy things that are hard to read and take away much of the pleasure. You, on the other hand, have a great balance going on! Very fun to read! I'm assuming the epilogue comes next? Please? lol
person mlui
schedule October 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
9: Yah! She remembers! Great chapter and well, poor Charlie too. =D
schedule October 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Boo Boo dear that was simply very intense. We need more and of course we need a cure and PRONTO!!!!!! LOL