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for Mrs Malfoy

by booback

schedule May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great chapter sad st her father, and it was kool u mentione Manchester untied I am a huge fan and they just won the league so I am over moon, but this story is interesting, and is she pregnant?
person Robs
schedule May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh No! Life's a bit shit for Hermione right now, ain't it? I'm glad you have written Draco as (dare I say it?) fluffy(ish), because otherwise her life would be complete hell on earth. It's nice that he's there to look after her. I hope there will be more smut soon....although it is a bit weird for them to do it while she is without her memory still...

Look forward to the next chapter!!!
schedule May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! Bloody fucking brilliant!
schedule May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow she fell i can't waitr to see hiw she wakes up
schedule May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
she's a right mess....
schedule May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I look forward to reading more.
person Mia
schedule May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Evil evil deliciously hopeful cliffer. I love you babe. I love the way you write, I love the pen name you have, I love your Malfoy, and especially your originality. And your humour and schmexiness. Thank you love. And thanks for not being offended. Didn't REALLY think you would be, not with Your pen name.

~Mia
schedule May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
:( poor Hermione! ... and her mum, having to keep telling her about her fathers death all the time.
Update soon!
xxx
person polka dot
schedule May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
super ouchie, that's probably not going to help her memory (heh)
schedule May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well that explains a bit. Can't wait to see how this turns out. Eagerly awaiting your next chapter Miss. =)