rate_review Reviews

This is incredible; I love it. The plot is original and it's all very well written. . . brilliant.

that was so sad. i loved how light it seemed at first, what with the lack of blatant use of force to conquer etsuji. what made it dark was kyousuke always hiding in the shadows, always looking after etsuji. while this could be sweet in some world, your story line made it appear as what it really is: a growing dangerous obsession. the ending was so bittersweet. i especially felt harry's vulnerability with their return to the present and hermione screaming at him. i really liked how ron was able to pull them all back together. like in the previous chapter, i really liked how you tied together the past and the present. while you were creating an alternate universe, the original canon characters were not being lost. so excited to see the next one. thanks for sharing this with us. PS. you uploaded chapter two twice. :D

Soooo need chapter 3!!! Is Scorpius getting Draco? Does he see the entwined paths?

Ohh, I loooove this story. Great job changing Hermione and Ron's point of view, so they're learning to like and love the beautiful silver eyed boy. Ahh...who'll be the genius to understand the misterious boy is Draco? Poor, sweet Draco, I hope Scorpius was going to warn him. Just a little thing: you've posted chapter 2 twice...evil girl: I thought you posted two chapter!!! WANT CHAPTER 3. SOON. Kisses

omg i love this story. i hope that you will update soon. i wondered what the emergency scorpious had to attend to was. cant wait for the next update.

all i can say is amazing. this is a very unique plot and i really loved how you started light, almost funny, and ended up angsty and dark. i felt the savagery of harry's past life and how deep his obsession went. marcus was so well-written; like a different character altogether. the brutality with which he treated caedryn was brilliantly written as it was coupled with that irreverent admiration. i loved the complexity you introduced to each character. so looking forward to more. :)

i love this story so far. it has an intresting story line that most stories dont have. i love the direction that your taking having Draco Malfoy's son being Harry's psychologist. i cant wait for the next chapter.

Amazing, how this began, and I can't wait to see what you have coming up next! So please continue to show more!

Ohhh, but this is amazing! It's really been so long since I last read a story so intriguing. Hope you're going to update soooooon. I can't wait to read more.

can't wait for more