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by ranmouri

person StaroVatis
schedule August 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I know I shouldnt rush but I going crazy I have to know who why?
person bloodsoakedninja
schedule August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i wonder who it is, lucius or severous. i cant wait for the next chapter.
schedule August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 5!!!
person butterpie
schedule August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh wowsers, it's someone that they all know. Just guessing, but is it Ginny, Severus, or Pansy? Guess only you will tell when you're ready, so on that note please continue-hmmm?
person Slashylicious
schedule July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Finally i have found a brilliant H/D story again!!!,it must have been a century since i last have read such a great story^^
Im so exited XD i hope you gonna update the next chapter soon
person CatGotMyHeart88
schedule July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Suburb! This fanfiction is like a breath of fresh air please continue as soon as possible.I love the time periods and the various lives behavior patterns, I wonder when your next chapter takes place.
person sonykit
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this was just so twisted. the concept was fairly disturbing and the madness was almost overwhelming. i especially like the last part wherein they were revealing who they were in that past life. everyone's character was so unexpected and i can't wait for the revelation of who marcel was. while i have my guesses, i will stop thinking because you always surprise your readers anyway. this chapter was well-written - the suspense and intensity were well played out. i liked the part where both jean and xavier, both previously denying their love for each other, finally confessed in that climactic and insane moment. hoping for more real soon. :D
person butterpie
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wowsers, I am amazed at how each part of this tale is full of emotion and seems to loop over and over as it ends only to begin anew in another time and place. Please continue.
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 4!!! What a sad ending!
person bloodsoakedninja
schedule July 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love this story, i'm so glad that you updated. i cant wait for the next chapter. i wonder why the next life is going to be so intense? update soon.