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Some time ago read a Harry/Draco story by Maya, "Your every wish". Sadly, she took it down, like all her other excellent stories (I now deeply regret I did not download them). Your story reminds me very much of hers, even if her story was more disturbing. Your story carries a bit of the same question at the end - how much is really Snape, and how much Harrys wish?

that was amazinggggg from beginning to end. the only thing that kind of threw me off was when they bonded and Snape turned back to normal. i kind of wish you added more detail to show that it was the real Snape aside from just his voice. i realize they are laying in bed but i just feel like something else should have been different that said yup that is the old Snape! it was excellent though. =)

I loved it!! It was an amazing read, the way u potrade Snape was wonderful, having read most of the HP sieries i could tell that you didnt really change the personalities or Harry or Snape. I love that!! Love the story and i am really enviose of you right now, i wish i had the talent to write as well as you do, all my writing sound like a nine year old wrote them -_- lol. But thanks for the story!!! it was a GREAT!!!

When you described the bond that will come into effect between Harry and Severus, I thought, "there's absolutely no way a *normal* relationship will work." I'm afraid that even after reading the rest of your story, I'm still hesitant to believe your solution.

It has always been my opinion that no two people can be so perfect together that they never clash. To truly have the sort of understanding expressed in fanfiction, a couple would need to undergo the same sort of experiences, each with the same level of impact on the psyche at approximately the same points in time in their lives, have grown up in the same environment, had the same companions (friends and enemies), et cetera. Since there are so many variables that dictate our respective personalities, then surely it is nearly impossible that there's not even one thing that we would not like to change about our partners. If the bond between Severus and Harry works the way you described it, then surely Harry will imprint some aspect of his ideal mate upon Severus. For example, since Harry is so frightened that he will force Severus into doing something he does not want to do, then is it not possible that his deepest wish is that Severus assuages that fear and let Harry do what he wants with a clear conscience?

This is not to take anything away from your story, which I think is wonderfully written. The plot (though I still have trouble believing it completely) is still quite unique. I will most certainly keep an eye out for your stories in the future.

Great story, I really loved it, the smut was great, just the right amount of angst and the perfect happy ending, just loved it !!!

i really loved this story. i couldn't stop reading. thank you

Freaking FANTASTIC! This story is awesome in ways I can't even describe! Gah this is sooo great! And finished, and oooooh I LOVE you to little itty bitty pieces for writing this loveliness and sharing it with us! Thank you thank you thank you! *GLOMP*

Wow. This has to be the best Slave!Snape story I have ever read (and I usually don't read those:)) Rarely have I ever been so touched by the depth of emotions and feelings you explored.

I freely admit that at some point in the story, tear flowed freely, especially at Harry's guilt.

There is one scene that really worked for me; the one on the broom. It evoked such a tender atmosfere, that it felt like I was right there to witness it.

Of course, I am extremely happy with the sweet ending, and I really thank you for the fact that you made Snape .. well, Snape again! It just hurt to read how the curse forced Snape to be submissive, and I honestly prefer him snarky as he is!

To conclude, excellent work!

Absolutely amazing story :) I love the way you captured the emotions so poignantly, essentially Severus was ooc but with such an interesting plot you made it work and made it realistic too, I adore what you did. Great piece.

Atipicl this is your best yet. I have bookedmarked it and will read over and over again. So do I need to say how much I LOVED IT? Thanks for posting.
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