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May 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
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May 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A pretty good start, if a bit brief. You didn't set it up with much background information, which leaves a lot of questions, especially how all four of them ended up in a relationship together when there was so much animosity between them. I love a good slashy fic as much as the next perv, *snerk* but I also like it to make passable sense. Some background would be a good thing to tighten up the storyline.
Please continue.
Please continue.
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May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love the story. I never reads threesome and foursome. but these are my fav pairing. i am very interested.
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May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting...I definately look forward to reading more!
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May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good story
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May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Like this very much. Please update soon
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May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a wonderful start, I look forward to reading more
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May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am usually rather Hermione-centric in my choise of fics to read, but have a soft spot for Severus/Remus too, so I thougth I could just look a little into your story. I am very happy I did, I loved this first chapter, it was well written and you are doing an amazing job balanzing your characters so far. I am really, really, looking forward to read more!!!
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May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Somewhat OOC, but keep up the good work~
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May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Seems very interesting! Can't wait to see where this goes! I would love to know when you update!