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for True Love and Other Natural Disasters

by vbruce

person Anon
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm riveted. More, please!
schedule June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woops! I'm a little behind on this story. You are such a master of characterizations! These people just seem to jump off the page and act out your story right in front of me. (No, I'm not off my meds.) I enjoy your Lucius/Hermione pairing very much, and the way you always get them together even if they don't cooperate very well. Draco and Pansy are people I would really like to hang out with--never a dull moment! Thanks for updating. I needed a Phoenix Phix!
schedule May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG - I love your Draco/Pansy dynamic. They are not my fave pairing but you do them so well. Pansy is hilarious and so down to earth. I think she and Hermione are fantastic together as well.

Love the snippet of our protagonists bumping into each other...I can't believe he noticed her and touched her curls. The devil.
schedule May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A great chapter. Looking forward to the next one.
person Tazzy
schedule May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*cackles* Sorry I haven't reviewed the past three chapters, but I didn't know you updated. So very silly of me.

*snickers* Pansy is such a delightful young woman. *smirks* Draco really would be bored with anyone else. And why can I see Pansy talking to Narcissa to set everything up after hearing Draco pout about his father's lack of life once too often?
schedule May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, Draco wants answers and Lucius is getting snarky! Can a portrait go senile? interesting concept, really. More!
schedule May 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Update soon. I think that your ideas for this story are genius. I love Pansy, and Draco is a laugh! Great job.
schedule May 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice setup. I loved the description of Pansy and Draco's relationship--oddly, I can actually see them being like that!
schedule May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
How horrid and boring indeed? Oh, I love the refreshing take on Draco/Pansy (despite my hating the pairing), you've given us a lovely new way of looking at them. And I love your Draco - he's so funny and so manly yet so Malfoy.

Lucius won't know what hit him.
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A great chapter. Looking forward to reading more.