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for Their Phoenix

by Lomonaaeren

person Tiffani
schedule August 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is an awesome chapter lol
I love it
Great job
schedule August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awes. -Sniffles.- That was so incredibly sweet! I also loved how they finally got that bitch Huxley! >D -Cackles.- I have soooo been waiting for her to go down. Can't wait to read more. =]
schedule August 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So sorry I have been away for so long. I have been having serious issues with my computer. But they are gone and I am back. These chapters have been absolutely fabulously fantastic!!!! I am extatic that the Huxley issue has finally been resolved lol. And that Harry has come to his senses. This story is one of my personal favorites. The detail and passion one can feel while reading it is brilliant. Not many people can do that well, but you can and for that you get a serious round of applause from me!!!!! As always I can't wait for the next chapter. Now that I have a computer again I will be looking for updates often. Congrats and much love =)
person k lave demo
schedule August 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
before i say anything else these last three chapters have been absolutely delicious. i am VERY appreciative of the fact that u don't sacrifice plot for smut. i will say though that the smut scene in chapter 26 didn't make sense at first and i had to reread it a few times before i got the whole mechanics right. not ur fault i just miss details at times. i'm curious. u've mentioned harry's past a few times. is that just draco's and severus' way of reminding themselves that harry hasn't had the easiest life or are u gointo have the address it later on. n thank god huxley's out of the picture. can't stand narrow-minded people. anxiously awaitin ur next update. viva la vida!
schedule August 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes, of course, silly me, the bond would make everything easily resolvable. Doh! *smacks head*

I look forward to the updates on this so much, just so you know. Even more so now I read your promise about not killing any of the main three off.

And, three cheers for Huxley finally getting her comeuppance. I hope she *is* a problem well and truly solved now.
schedule August 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Super high-flying speeds of thought. I like this newly revealed side of the bond!
*cheers in excitement for Huxley going down* W00t W00t! *does dance* *trips and falls over flailing limbs*
Can't wait to read more!
person EarlyDawn
schedule August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, uaed to be LoBaR624, just wanted to let you know that I haven't forgotten or given up on this story. I thought it was cool to read how Harry would take control in a situation like that. I LOVED seeing Draco being so emotional(in a way) that he allowed himself to be ruffled and not look perfect. It was great and I can't wait for the next chapter and have fun moving.
person nekoyoka
schedule August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was gone all day and didn't get to read this until just now! Finally, something is being done about Huxley! I wish you luck with moving, although I am depressed that you won't be posting the next chapter for another week; I should have waited until after I came back from vacation to read this. Anyway, looking forward to your next update!
person VoraciousReader
schedule August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah, they gave him a viable political solution, one that a more experienced spin doctor would have seen after her attack on Harry, I think. Calling her mad is an excellent aolution and not far off the mark, really. That's how they imprisoned the Marquis de Sade after the French Revolution, did you know? At the time it was the equivalent of going after a gangster for tax evasion.
schedule August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully done. This story has become one of my favorites out of your many, many successes. I adore Severus, Draco, and Harry together, and I think you've done a masterful job at getting inside their heads, bringing their ever-so-complicated personalities and subtle quirks to life. I can't wait for the next chapter!